Surat e iztarab baqi hai
bujhti ankhon mai khwab baqi hai
yad ke ujhrhey huey daman mai
ik bikharta gulab baqi hai
jate jate jo de gaya tha koi
ranj wo be hisab baqi hai
qatra qatra jo gira hai rooh par
raftagan ka azab baqi hai
arzu ka faraib khatm hua
khwaheshon ka saraab baqi hai
Re: Iztarab
Surat e iztarab baqi hai bujhti ankhon mai khwab baqi hai yad ke ujhrhey huey daman mai ik bikharta gulab baqi hai jate jate jo de gaya tha koi ranj wo be hisab baqi hai qatra qatra jo gira hai rooh par raftagan ka azab baqi hai arzu ka faraib khatm hua khwaheshon ka saraab baqi hai
*Great. It's hard to lose what one once loved.
Keep writing. I see promise here. *
PS: I am afraid I'm not in a position to welcome you here
when some old moustached, stale pro seems to have bent upon
banning me from this site.
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Surat e iztarab baqi hai bujhti ankhon mai khwab baqi hai yad ke ujhrhey huey daman mai ik bikharta gulab baqi hai jate jate jo de gaya tha koi ranj wo be hisab baqi hai qatra qatra jo gira hai rooh par raftagan ka azab baqi hai arzu ka faraib khatm hua khwaheshon ka saraab baqi hai
bohat khoob...................
its simply amazing............
n the flow in in ur poetry is superb!!!
Re: Iztarab
aray wah 
aatay hi mehfil loot li.
main kaafi dinoon kay baad yahan post kar raha hoon iss liye pehli baar aap ko yahan daikha hai. bohat achi ghazal hai :k:
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I agree with chacha_Ghalib:
“aatay hi mehfil loot li.”
**Congratulations. **
Aur apnay aap hi baray-baray banay baithay
**shaairon ko **dikha diya shairi kisay kehtay hain.
Please keep writing and posting. I liked your poem.
Re: Iztarab
Jab'taak Ankhoon kay Khwaab baqi hain
is Zindagii kay Azzaab baqi haain
(Aliyish)
Re: Iztarab
Surat e iztarab baqi hai bujhti ankhon mai khwab baqi hai yad ke ujhrhey huey daman mai ik bikharta gulab baqi hai jate jate jo de gaya tha koi ranj wo be hisab baqi hai qatra qatra jo gira hai rooh par raftagan ka azab baqi hai arzu ka faraib khatm hua khwaheshon ka saraab baqi hai
mirage bohat umda tehreer hey. Aap ney to wa'qai aatey saath hi mehfil loot li :) Daad qabool kijeeye :)
Re: Iztarab
well thanks. :)
Re: Iztarab
well thanks. :)
We are profoundly obliged that you accepted our appreciation. So very nice and kind of you.
Re: Iztarab
well thanks. :)
Now I am waiting for your next post.
Re: Iztarab
nice effort mirage :)
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beautiful...