Itna toota hoon keh.....

Aryaan · October 9, 2004, 2:05am

Itna toota hoon ke choone se bikhar jaaun ga
Ab agar aur dua do ge tau marr jaaun ga..

Pooch kar mera pata waqt raigaan na karo
Main tau banjaara hoon, kya jaane kidhar jaaun ga

Harr taraf dhundd hai, jugnu hai, na charaagh koi
Kaun pehchaane ga basti mein agar jaaun ga

Zindagi, main bhi musaafir hoon teri kashti ka
Tu jahan mujh se kahe gi main utar jaaun ga

Phool reh jaayen ge guldaamon mein yaadon ki nazar
Main tau khushboo hoon fizaaon mein bikhar jaaun ga

show_sha · October 9, 2004, 10:18am

very nice aryaan

Aryaan · October 11, 2004, 1:46am

Thanx show_sha :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 11, 2004, 8:13am

Mae tu khushbo hoon fizaoN mien bikhar jaoun ga :k:

Beautiful ghazal

thx for sharin

system · October 11, 2004, 8:40am

very nice :k:

Aryaan · October 11, 2004, 1:27pm

Thanx "Vivacious" aur "HeArT HaCKeR". :)

reet · October 14, 2004, 5:17am

Phool reh jaayen ge guldaamon mein yaadon ki nazar
Main tau khushboo hoon fizaaon mein bikhar jaaun ga

bhoot khoob Aryan…:k::k:

really u have gr8 choice…

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 15, 2004, 12:00am

bohut khoob .. :k: ..

Aryaan · March 1, 2005, 4:30am

Re: Itna toota hoon keh.....

Thanx Reet , & Ghazal .....:)

Aryaan · March 1, 2005, 4:36am

Re: Itna toota hoon keh.....

Main sochta hoon shehar ke pathar samait kar
Woh kaun tha jo raah ko phoolon se bhar gaya

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 1, 2005, 8:07am

Re: Itna toota hoon keh…

^ lovely shair :k: :k:

Aryaan · March 1, 2005, 1:48pm

Re: Itna toota hoon keh…

Thanx HeArT HaCKeR…

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 3, 2005, 9:09am

Re: Itna toota hoon keh…

Zabardast… Very Nice Aryaan … Tnx

rao00 · March 3, 2005, 2:35pm

Re: Itna toota hoon keh.....

bohot khoob

Aryaan · March 3, 2005, 8:12pm

Re: Itna toota hoon keh.....

Shukriya GS & Rao00 .....:)