Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay......!!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Mahsoos Hoo Kay Dard ka Ahsaas Murr Giya
Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay

Pehloo Main Ik Shoor-e-Qiyamat Bhee Hoo Bapa
Oor Bay Khudii Bhee woh kay Sunaii Na Daay

Taira Qafas Rahay Na Mairaa Aashiyaan Rahay
Siyaad Hukam-e-Naghma Siraii Na Daay Mujhay

Yeh Taira Hukm Hai Too Mujhay Yeh Saza Qabool
Mairaa Khiyaal Hai Too Rihaii Na Daay Mujhay

Aay Shook -e- Deed Deekhna Himat Na Haarna
Aay Husn-e-Jalwa Baar Dikhaii Na Daay Mujhay

Pounchay Thay Baam Say Tairay Jalway Nigah Tak
Niklay Bhee Chand Oor Dikhaii Na Daay Mujhay

Ghuncha Khilay Taar -e- Rag -e- Jaan Khanak Uthay
Dil Toot Jaiy Oor Sunaii Bhee Na Daay

Ik Aaisay Parda Daar Key Mujh Koo Talash Hai

Jiss Ka Suragh Sarii Khudaii Na Daay Mujhay

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Re: Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay…!!!

bhut achay:k:

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Re: Re: Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay…!!!

Thank uuuuu

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Nice :k:

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Bahut khoob !

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Re: Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay......!!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muddi: *
Mahsoos Hoo Kay Dard ka Ahsaas Murr Giya
Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay

Pehloo Main Ik Shoor-e-Qiyamat Bhee Hoo Bapa
Oor Bay Khudii Bhee woh kay Sunaii Na Daay

Taira Qafas Rahay Na Mairaa Aashiyaan Rahay
Siyaad Hukam-e-Naghma Siraii Na Daay Mujhay

Yeh Taira Hukm Hai Too Mujhay Yeh Saza Qabool
Mairaa Khiyaal Hai Too Rihaii Na Daay Mujhay

Aay Shook -e- Deed Deekhna Himat Na Haarna
Aay Husn-e-Jalwa Baar Dikhaii Na Daay Mujhay

Pounchay Thay Baam Say Tairay Jalway Nigah Tak
Niklay Bhee Chand Oor Dikhaii Na Daay Mujhay

Ghuncha Khilay Taar -e- Rag -e- Jaan Khanak Uthay
Dil Toot Jaiy Oor Sunaii Bhee Na Daay

Ik Aaisay Parda Daar Key Mujh Koo Talash Hai

Jiss Ka Suragh Sarii Khudaii Na Daay Mujhay
[/QUOTE]

Nice one!

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LOvely jee....

Mahsoos Hoo Kay Dard ka Ahsaas Murr Giya
Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay

Pehloo Main Ik Shoor-e-Qiyamat Bhee Hoo Bapa
Oor Bay Khudii Bhee woh kay Sunaii Na Daay

Yeh Taira Hukm Hai Too Mujhay Yeh Saza Qabool
Mairaa Khiyaal Hai Too Rihaii Na Daay Mujhay

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Re: Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay…!!!

Mahsoos Hoo Kay Dard ka Ahsaas Murr Giya
Itna Sakoo~n Bhee Sham-e-Judaii Na Daay

Pehloo Main Ik Shoor-e-Qiyamat Bhee Hoo Bapa
Oor Bay Khudii Bhee woh kay Sunaii Na Daay

Taira Qafas Rahay Na Mairaa Aashiyaan Rahay
Siyaad Hukam-e-Naghma Siraii Na Daay Mujhay

Yeh Taira Hukm Hai Too Mujhay Yeh Saza Qabool
Mairaa Khiyaal Hai Too Rihaii Na Daay Mujhay

Aay Shook -e- Deed Deekhna Himat Na Haarna
Aay Husn-e-Jalwa Baar Dikhaii Na Daay Mujhay

Pounchay Thay Baam Say Tairay Jalway Nigah Tak
Niklay Bhee Chand Oor Dikhaii Na Daay Mujhay

Ghuncha Khilay Taar -e- Rag -e- Jaan Khanak Uthay
Dil Toot Jaiy Oor Sunaii Bhee Na Daay

Ik Aaisay Parda Daar Key Mujh Koo Talash Hai

Jiss Ka Suragh Sarii Khudaii Na Daay Mujhay
excellent!!:k:

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Thank U

arifnawaz, CC, Lamhay, Arsh Jii and Ghazal Kissi Ke

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bohot khoob :flower1:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Muddi: *
Thank U

arifnawaz, CC, Lamhay, Arsh Jii and Ghazal Kissi Ke
[/QUOTE]

opppps dear!!! u made a mistake
ghazal kisi ke and u welcome:)

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wow… so beautiful… really nice… :k:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

opppps dear!!! u made a mistake
ghazal kisi ke and u welcome:)
[/QUOTE]

Yup I misspelled Kisi as Kissi Lakin Iss Ka Mutlib Howa Zoor ziada diya na Kisi Pay:) I shall be careful in future

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Thank u:)

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Shukriyaa:)