itna jo piyar dooo ........

[sarmad786]

mai agr ankhoo mai jo
tjh ko aise sma loo

apne dil ko
tere kadmoo mai dal dooo

to bolo inaam mai
apne dil
mai reko gi kya tum

or mai agrr
tmhe is qadar jo
piyar dooo

k khud ko tm pe jo
nichar doo

rekh k haath mere dil pe
yeah wada do
k kroo gi piyar tum b mjhe .

or kabhi teri be-rukhi
sangdili se jo
tang aa krr apni zindagi har doo

to btayoo nah..
itna to kroo gi

jo ho ga rati bhar piyar
bhi tmhre dil main
to chali ayoo gi
mrii qabar prr tum..
or bha krr do ansoo ..
amar krr doo gi mrii mubhat ko tum ..

or go nah piyar tumhe to

kroo yeah ehad k nibhaoo gi tum …
k mjhe bhool hi jayoo gi tum …(zia)

[LP]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo …

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

nice bt ap hamaisha blank verse he q likhte hai?
how stupid i m tht askin this question.

[sarmad786]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

just random yaar .... koi khas waja nhi .......jo dil mai hota hai likh daita hoo .... i m not a proper poet .....mai to bas apne emotions ko paper pe utarta hoo thats it ...simple

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

wht do u mean by yaar?mujhe ap ka andaz-e-takhatub pasand nai aya, agar main ap ko comment kerti hoon to jst bcoz of ur post or kuch nai.

[sarmad786]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

yaar mean friend.... watelse ...every1 one on this forum is a friend ... koi enemy thora hai .... i dnt know app ko ky apasand nhi aya......anywyz sorry .... it was not intended.

[Shazia_Arif]

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i m nt v conservative bt sumtimes sum words hurt me,i think i m v introverd & cultured.

[LP]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

blank verse ka mutlub?

[sarmad786]

i m nt v conservative bt sumtimes sum words hurt me,i think i m v introverd & cultured.

seriously ..i had no intention to hurt u .. its just i m from lahore so sometimes i get verve thats it .... yaar is a very common word there.....so got use of it . Sorrry ... no hard feelings plz ... i will try no to use that word infurture specially against u .

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

its ok sarmad.
blank verse means azaad nazam.

[sarmad786]

Re: itna jo piyar dooo ........

thanks alot SHAZIA.