~* Itmenaan *~

Philanthrope · November 3, 2003, 6:40am

Aaj bhi voh pagli haath phailae... Dair talak.. Apnay haathon ki raikhao'on ko takti rahi Ik lakeer ko dosri se joora... Dosri ko teesri se... Aur bil-akhir Apnay sajan ka naam tarteeb day liya Chehray pe rang-bahar aae.. Muskurae.... aur So gae Taroon nay sargooshi ki Aaj phir iss bhooli soorat ko Gehri neend aae gi...

By:
Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)

Azad · November 3, 2003, 6:55am

Wah

Zakhmi_Umar · November 3, 2003, 9:05am

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Superb , remarkable thanx for sharing :k:

Philanthrope · November 3, 2003, 10:03am

^ Thanks for the appriciation :)

JonyBr · November 3, 2003, 10:06am

Zabardast… i m speechless.

cuteepie · November 3, 2003, 10:26am

superb :k:

Amal · November 3, 2003, 11:34am

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I was thinking it must by Parveen Shakir before reaching “By: Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)” … A really superb personal work to witness on GS after a long long
time:k: May I request to see more from your diary?

smilly · November 3, 2003, 12:11pm

zaberdest:k::k:

thx for sharing:)

Man_de_Mouj · November 3, 2003, 3:35pm

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Wah Wah...too good, excellent

Philanthrope · November 4, 2003, 12:55am

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Oh thanks Amal… That really is a big compliment for me :)… and I think I dont deserve it really
As far as my poetry is concerned I have shared almost all of my poems here … I’ll give you the links of those posts as well …

Thanks again

Thanks a lot every one…

_Passionate · November 4, 2003, 1:54am

beautiful yaara……

Philanthrope · November 4, 2003, 1:56am

^ Thanks yaara :D

BeWaQooF · November 4, 2003, 3:01am

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Wah Wah Wah

Buhat Khoob

Keep It Up

:k::k:
:k:

Philanthrope · November 5, 2003, 5:13am

^ Thanks janab...

Friends...Thanks for the appriciating pms as well :)

chodhry · November 5, 2003, 7:44am

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:k: bohat acha likha ambreen aap ney, berri diff feel hoi… thanks for sharing n han likhti rha kerien am looking forward to see more stuff by you.

Capricorn · November 5, 2003, 8:11am

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Buhat khoobsurat nazm hai :k:
BTW Naam kia likha tha?

AQ · November 5, 2003, 10:52am

Taroon nay sargooshi ki
Aaj phir iss bhooli soorat ko
Gehri neend aae gi...

^

Amber: i dunno what do u mean to say here exactly but what i could understand (and correct me if I interpret it wrong) is that you have sketched a scenario of an innocent person who is not aware of the future and is happy in the present.. unaware of the future, every thing in the surrounding looks beautiful and so calm that the person can feel comfort and sleeps in harmony...

Ironically, the word "bhooli" depicts the sad future awaiting for her and the life still goes on!!!! :(

Ballie_Thakur · November 5, 2003, 11:27am

kya kehney hein…:k:

Jaan_Lewaa · November 5, 2003, 1:54pm

:k:

Philanthrope · November 5, 2003, 1:55pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
Taroon nay sargooshi ki
Aaj phir iss bhooli soorat ko
Gehri neend aae gi...

^

Amber: i dunno what do u mean to say here exactly but what i could understand (and correct me if I interpret it wrong) is that you have sketched a scenario of an innocent person who is not aware of the future and is happy in the present.. unaware of the future, every thing in the surrounding looks beautiful and so calm that the person can feel comfort and sleeps in harmony...

Ironically, the word "bhooli" depicts the sad future awaiting for her and the life still goes on!!!! :(
[/QUOTE]

Exactly Anwaar... iss ka yehi matlab hai... ke voh bhooli larki mustakbil say na-ashna hai aur apni masoom koshish say usska naam tarteeb day ker yeh samajh rahi hai ke aab voh usski taqdeer ka hissa bhi ban jaega... aur yehi itmenaan ussko gehri neend sulaata hai :)

Thanks for liking @ Ballie & Jaan Lewaa :)