itanii muddat baad mile ho

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ehsan February 6, 2014, 7:23am 1

**itanii muddat baad mile ho
kin sochon mein gum rahate ho

tez havaa ne mujh se puuchhaa
ret pe kyaa likhate rahate ho

kaun sii baat hai tum mein aisii
itane achchhe kyon lagate ho

hum se na puuchho hijr ke qisse
apanii kaho ab tum kaise ho **

_Masoom_Muskaan February 6, 2014, 8:19am 2

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

nice :k:

muqawwee123 February 6, 2014, 8:43am 3

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

**tez havaa ne mujh se puuchhaa
ret pe kyaa likhate rahate ho

sirf tez hawa ya barish bhi sath thi?
**

tarash February 6, 2014, 8:54am 4

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

**kaun sii baat hai tum mein aisii
itane achchhe kyon lagate ho

make up ka kamal
**

tarash February 6, 2014, 8:55am 5

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

aaj kal UK mein tez hawaon ka raaj hai

ehsan February 6, 2014, 1:59pm 6

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

Aaj kul toh hur taraf tez hawein hain.

madz124 February 6, 2014, 2:34pm 7

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

Aur agar yeh shair Canada walon ne likha hota, tu** ret **ki jagah barf hota.

ehsan February 6, 2014, 3:03pm 8

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

Canada kanaam hee “barf wala mulk” rukh dena chahiye.

muqawwee123 February 6, 2014, 3:48pm 9

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

gola ganda?

madz124 February 6, 2014, 4:06pm 10

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KKF February 6, 2014, 4:08pm 11

Re: itanii muddat baad mile ho

yeh kia aapke moHalle kii tasveer hai? ab talaash karnaa aasaan ho jaayegaa!