issay tu thek se shayed bichrna b nahi ata

Koyal · February 22, 2006, 11:49pm

suno!
tum tu azmm waley ho**bala ka zabet rekhtey ho
tumhein kuch bhi nahi ho ga
mager dekho
jissay tum chorey jatey ho
issay tu theek se shayed
bicherna bhi nahi aaya
suno!
tum azmm waley ho
issay matt chor k jao

twin_born · February 22, 2006, 11:56pm

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Yeh kyaa thaaa ,

Its not complete in any sense ...

ASA · February 23, 2006, 6:53am

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subhanAllah… bouhat khoob koyal :k:

SunnyBoy · February 23, 2006, 6:03pm

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nice :k:

Amal · February 23, 2006, 6:53pm

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With due respect, I do not see it incomplete in any sense. There might be more to it, but even this much tells what it was supposed to tell. That’s the beauty of poetry, you can say it in any amount of words as you like.

Thanx Koyal for sharing this beauty

safeena · February 24, 2006, 4:35pm

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Buhat Zabardasttt..!

Pakeeza · February 25, 2006, 9:03pm

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Very nice Poori post karni thi:~)

IS · February 25, 2006, 10:12pm

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Nice

chalo_ab_faisla_kar_lo · February 26, 2006, 8:57pm

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assalm-o-alaikum
guys this is my first time to join a forum and i have no idea about messaged here.any way when i was born that was also my first experience so hopefully u guys find me a genius:D.koyal ,very nice:k: .

darwesh · February 27, 2006, 3:33am

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Koyal ji.....
Kia baat hai..... mukhtasar magar moassar !
Khushbash.....
Yeh hai kon bhala ?

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:00am

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ab kia bataiey:blush:

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:01am

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acha faisla kia ap ne koyal ki post main anay ka thanks any ways:cb:and w’salam

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:04am

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thanks

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:05am

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thanks but itni he thei na :)

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:06am

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bohat shukria:)

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:07am

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thanks Amal

Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:08am

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Koyal · February 28, 2006, 2:09am

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thanks sweet:)

Zakhmi_Umar · April 8, 2006, 11:19am

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aap kehti ho tu nahi chor kar jata
waise mien faisla kar chuka hoon

very nice thanks for sharing
Koyal jee

Koyal · April 8, 2006, 10:22pm

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ab tu ap chalay gaye tu kia kahiey
thanks for liking :)