Iss Tarah Nahi Kertay, Raabta To Rakhtay Hain..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity June 6, 2008, 7:14am 1

Aik Ghazal Jo Mujhe Sms Ke Through Mili,

Iss Tarah Nahi Kertay, Raabta To Rakhtay Hain
Thora Milnay Julnay Ka, Silsila To Rakhtay Hain

Manzilain Buland Hon To Mushkilain Bhi Aati Hain
Mushkilon Se Larnay Ka Hosla To Rakhtay Hain

Jo Tumharay Apne Hon, Tum Se Pyar Kertay Hon
Unn Ka Haal Kesa Hai, Kuch Pata To Rakhtay Hain

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Ali_jee June 6, 2008, 9:23am 2

Re: Iss Tarah Nahi Kertay, Raabta To Rakhtay Hain..

hmmmmm nice 1

redidentity June 6, 2008, 12:19pm 3

Re: Iss Tarah Nahi Kertay, Raabta To Rakhtay Hain..

thanks ali jee :)

Qadam BaRhaóo Gillani Chor Tumharay Saath haiN

hiba_no.1 June 6, 2008, 12:33pm 4

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v nice

abeeha June 6, 2008, 3:45pm 5

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short nd cute poem ..ur collection is always good.

Sheal June 6, 2008, 4:54pm 6

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nice....

Shab-e-Hijar June 6, 2008, 5:32pm 7

haan sahi kahrhy ho ... :D

_Masoom_Muskaan June 6, 2008, 8:26pm 8

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good :ASA:

shocking

shocking

SunnyBoy June 7, 2008, 12:58am 9

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nice :k:

redidentity June 7, 2008, 4:07am 10

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aap sab ka buhat shukria.. esp abeeha and Shab jee :)

SinlneR June 7, 2008, 6:03pm 11

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wah.. sach kaha..

Jo Tumharay Apne Hon, Tum Se Pyar Kertay Hon Unn Ka Haal Kesa Hai, Kuch Pata To Rakhtay Hain*

i luved this one..

thanx for sharing.

bheegiyaad June 7, 2008, 6:23pm 12

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nice

moonmine June 7, 2008, 8:01pm 13

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Jo Tumharay Apne Hon, Tum Se Pyar Kertay Hon
Unn Ka Haal Kesa Hai, Kuch Pata To Rakhtay Hain

hmmm... nice...

Dushwari June 7, 2008, 8:35pm 14

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mukarer, Ahmer.

very nice poem.

best,
Dushwari

NikamiJano June 7, 2008, 9:27pm 15

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sahi kaha red :k:

redidentity June 9, 2008, 4:25am 16

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aap sab ka buhat buhat shukria :)

How famous are you in the cafe ???

ruswa June 9, 2008, 6:17am 17

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Nice one

S.786 June 9, 2008, 8:16am 18

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best...poem

redidentity June 9, 2008, 8:30am 19

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aap dono ka buhat shukria :)