Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

deep_ocean · August 5, 2007, 7:06pm

Isqadar tez roshni kub thi
woh tu hum thay kay bund aankho’n mai’n,
chund jugnoo jala’ay phirtay thay
warna taareek shub ke jungle mai’n
tund khoo veham say ataay rustay
aablo’n ke lahoo say maqtil thay
warna bai-simt aandhiyo’n kaa mizaaj
kon jaa nay kay kitna barham tha?
jis say khaa’if thay humsafar apnay
jo siyah shub kay surd maathay per
zard lamhay saja’aay phirtay thay
Ek aansoo-wo kum numaa aansoo
uss ko sooraj bana’ay phirtay thay
Isqadar tez roshni kub thi?.."
(Mohsin Naqvi)

_Masoom_Muskaan · August 5, 2007, 7:11pm

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

nice 1 deep samander:)

deep_ocean · August 5, 2007, 7:14pm

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

thanks innocent muskarahat :)

Shab-e-Hijar · August 5, 2007, 7:21pm

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

nice :k:

NikamiJano · August 5, 2007, 8:29pm

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

nice one ocean :)

Sheal · August 5, 2007, 8:36pm

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

nice :k:

redidentity · August 6, 2007, 4:41am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

Itni Piari Nazm Hai..

SJ · August 6, 2007, 6:53am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

Bohat khobsorat Nazam hai .app ki tarhan....
Jeetay Rahain..........:)

ASA · August 6, 2007, 6:55am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

** bouhat khoob.. **

deep_ocean · August 6, 2007, 7:35am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

thanks all :)

Prince_Ali · August 6, 2007, 11:34am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

buhut khub :k:

deep_ocean · August 7, 2007, 4:01am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

thanks :)

AQ · August 7, 2007, 4:15am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

bund aankhoN maiN jugnu :-/

Thanks deep for such a deep poem :)

deep_ocean · August 7, 2007, 4:28am

Re: Isqadar tez roshni kub thi

thanks a lot AQ :)