Re: Ismay Jaalaal
Don't mean to be negative, but the poem is "out of wazn." For example, Abdaal and Jalaal do not rhyme so much. Jalaal and Malaal do.
Re: Ismay Jaalaal
Don't mean to be negative, but the poem is "out of wazn." For example, Abdaal and Jalaal do not rhyme so much. Jalaal and Malaal do.