Re: Ismay Jaalaal
Don't mean to be negative, but the poem is "out of wazn." For example, Abdaal and Jalaal do not rhyme so much. Jalaal and Malaal do.
yeh kia misra hay ..mere zara nahi palay per raha ..is ko nasar main ker kay bataain naraz
agreed
Re: Ismay Jaalaal
Don't mean to be negative, but the poem is "out of wazn." For example, Abdaal and Jalaal do not rhyme so much. Jalaal and Malaal do.
yeh kia misra hay ..mere zara nahi palay per raha ..is ko nasar main ker kay bataain naraz
agreed