Islah (Poetry on Concern for Change at Home)

*mumliket-e-kaum ka sitara tootna chatha ho *
galiben mumkin hey<O:p</O:p
*rehnumaee bhe gumrahi ho chukey yoon, *
jeb juz ba juz<O:p</O:p
*is sey pheley, mager jawan roohoon key, *
*dimaghoon ka aslaha, *
iss baar<O:p</O:p
*waten ko peish hey zarrooret, *
key tameer kerney mey chahiyey, hisa hisa<O:p</O:p

Mods, if it is alright with you, can we begin in this thread sharing of original
verses on the care each one of us might have for the country, through our spoken words.

for the state of affairs in Pakistan, kindly share your free verses inspiring nation building works and ethics.

no one can reach Iqbal’s poetic excellence inciting conscientious polemics on state’s political addressing.
but we can try to bring together how we feel about this, through poetry.

best,

Dushwari

Re: Islah (Poetry on Concern for Change at Home)

mumliket-e-kaum ? whtz that?

Re: Islah (Poetry on Concern for Change at Home)

that is double emphasis on nation and its missing nation hood.

think out of the box, it will help.
disrupt the language that is fed into the mind.
so that you can actually think originally.
be it unconventional, who knows it may be the best thing you ever did.
best,

Dushwari