Koyal
June 12, 2007, 5:28am
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andheray raastoN maiN yuuN teri aa'nkhiaN chamakti haiN
khuda ki barkataiN jesay paha'rooN pe uterti haiN
mohabat karnay waley jab kabhi aansoo bahatey haiN
dilooN k aa’enay dhooti huwi palkaiN sanwarti haiN
dhuwaa’N se badle’ooN ko dekh k aksar wo kahti hai
hamesha chandni maiN bewafa roo’haiN bhatakti haiN
hamari zindghi maiN phool bun k koi aa’ya tha
isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
mujhay lagta hia dil khench ker chala aa’ta hai hatooN per
tujhay likhooN tu meri ungli’yaaN aisay dharakti haiN
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
hamari zindghi maiN phool bun k koi aa’ya tha
isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
simply awsome
IS
June 12, 2007, 6:12am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
*Welcome back aap kafi arsay k baaad aiee hain GS par *
*PS:- very nice sharing :-) *
muddii
June 12, 2007, 10:21am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
andheray raastoN maiN yuuN teri aa'nkhiaN chamakti haiN
khuda ki barkataiN jesay paha'rooN pe uterti haiN
mohabat karnay waley jab kabhi aansoo bahatey haiN
dilooN k aa'enay dhooti huwi palkaiN sanwarti haiN
dhuwaa'N se badle'ooN ko dekh k aksar wo kahti hai
hamesha chandni maiN bewafa roo'haiN bhatakti haiN
hamari zindghi maiN phool bun k koi aa'ya tha
isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
mujhay lagta hia dil khench ker chala aa'ta hai hatooN per
tujhay likhooN tu meri ungli'yaaN aisay dharakti haiN
Buhat Khubsorat Post.............by the way yeh phool ka kiya ziakar hai......kun lay kar ayya tha:)
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
**just loved it!!:k: **
Koyal
June 13, 2007, 1:41am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
thanks lonley
Koyal
June 13, 2007, 1:42am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
Buhat Khubsorat Post.............by the way yeh phool ka kiya ziakar hai......kun lay kar ayya tha:)
WO ap nahi they :D
Koyal
June 13, 2007, 1:42am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
*Welcome back aap kafi arsay k baaad aiee hain GS par *
*PS:- very nice sharing :-) *
bus masroof idher udher thanks for liking :)
Koyal
June 13, 2007, 1:43am
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Jhanjharewali:
**just loved it!!:k: **
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
bohat khoob koyal jee aap waqi main koyal ho jo dilon main apni awaz ka ras gholti hai or aap shairi sey and welcome back
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
very nice
Koyal
June 13, 2007, 1:03pm
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
hey main mar ja itni tareef tahreem g:blush: ..thanks
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
Hmm sab kah rahey hein buhat achi hey par humeiN kuch maza nahi aya, sorry:-(
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
last shair bara acha hai :D
wapis akar call nahi ki:( mai bohat naraz hooo
Amal
June 13, 2007, 6:33pm
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre’raiN mahakti haiN
Koyal saheba achi tehreer hey :k: Thanx for sharing it with us and welcome back
Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
buhat khob
Koyal
June 14, 2007, 2:58am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
last shair bara acha hai :D
wapis akar call nahi ki:( mai bohat naraz hooo
kar lo gal ulta naraz ho rahya call tu ap ko karna chaiey tha na :(
Koyal
June 14, 2007, 2:59am
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Re: isi ki yaad maiN ab taak ye tahre'raiN mahakti haiN
buhat khob
thanks DS :)
Koyal
June 14, 2007, 3:03am
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thanks and thanks