***Niya niya ishq karny walo , hami sy is ko ziyyan b pochoo ***
*** Bisat-e-hasti py ham ny haara , kbi sumander kbi sitaara… ***
**Niya niya ishq karny walo , hami sy is ko ziyyan b pochoo ** *** Bisat-e-hasti py ham ny haara , kbi sumander kbi sitaara..... ***
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aapkaa she'r paRhaa aur bhalaa bhii lagaa bahooot. daad qubool klijiye. zabana o bayaan kii riyaa'at aur uske Hawaale se 'arz karuuNgaa k aapne dusre misr'e meN "ham ne haaraa" [singular verb] likhaa jab k samandar aur sitaaraa [plural objects though singular...shaayad isii vajah se laGhzish hui] donoN milaa kar plural haiN...mere Khayaal se agar aap ise yuN kaheN to masalah Hal ho jaayegaa:
bisaat-e-hastii pe ham ne haare kabhii samandar, kabhii sitaaraa!
yeh maHez ek dostaana salaaH thii...aapko Haq hai k chaaheN to apnaayeN, chaaheN to mustarad kar deN...shukria :)**