'ishq kii aah o zaariyaaN na gaiiN...merii ek Ghazal

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

KKF December 25, 2015, 3:02am 1

salaam dosto,
ummeed hai k mizaaj-e-giraamii ba_Khair hoNge.

ek 'arsa_haa-e-daraaz ke ba’d apnii ek Ghazal aapkii ‘aaraa je liye pesh-e-Khidmat kar rahaa huN gar aapkii taba’-e-naazuk par baar-e-giraaN na guzre.

to, Ghazal mulaaHizah farmaaiye:

**1.
'ishq kii aah o zaariyaaN na gaiiN
Husn kii dil_farebiyaan na gaiiN

aaii peerii, gaye shabaab ke din
phir bhii ulfat_sho’aariyaan na gaiiN

aaNkhoN aaNkhoN meN kah diyaa sab kuchh
'ishq kii be_zabaaniyaaN na gaiiN

din to juuN tuuN guzar gayaa, lekin
raat kii be_qaraariyaaN na gaiiN

zabt kis tarHa ho sake, jab k
dil kii be_iKhtiyaariyaaN na gaiiN

huuN guneh_gaar phir bhii baKhshish kii
dil se ummeed_vaariyaaN na gaiiN

bandagii ko bhulaa diyaa maiN ne
unkii banda_navaaziyaaN na gaiiN

Shai’Kh_Ji tum se sab gayaa, lekin
jhooTii parhez_gaariyaaN na gaiiN

maut sar par khaRii hai, “Sai’hbaa-Ji!”
phir bhii rangiiN_bayaaniyaaN na gaiiN**

faqat Khaak_nashiiN,
_______KKF

Sehr_shah December 25, 2015, 4:38pm 2

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Bohat umda likha hai apne janab
or
apki khalis urdu ki jitni pazirae ki jae kam malom hoge
mukhtasiran
bohat khoob

Anjul December 25, 2015, 4:44pm 3

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Shandar zabarjast zindabad! Saatva toh bohatai kamaal hai

KKF December 25, 2015, 5:39pm 4

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Hausalah-afzaaii aur ta’reefii kalimaat ke liye banda teh-e-dil se shukria adaa kartaa hai.

KKF December 25, 2015, 5:41pm 5

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bahot bahot haardik dhanyavaad, Mahaashai!

btw, yeh merii post number 55555 thi!

Anjul December 25, 2015, 6:01pm 6

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@KKF 5 apka fav number h kya

Azad March 16, 2016, 3:03pm 7

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hummm khoob

KKF March 16, 2016, 5:31pm 8

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all FIVES look great, don’t they?

btw, i like ‘ODD’ numbers. next number will be: 66666

thank you.

Anjul March 16, 2016, 5:50pm 9

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Takhallus “Sai’hbaa-Ji!” kyu hai?

KKF March 16, 2016, 6:33pm 10

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Saihbaa was the taKhallus of one of the poets in my village who was a great post but not known to the world. he was so good that he received a pension [meant for artists/poets] from the UP government.

since i liked his poetry and his taKhallus, i adopted it after his death. he was my dad’s very close friend. my dad was also an unknown great poet. they had close relationship with AsGhar GonDvii who was their ustaad. Jigar Moradabadi was also AsGhar’s student. Sarojini Naidu, Sir Tej Bahadur Sapru and Firaq Gorakhpuri used to get together in Allahabad for private poetic sessions at least once a month. Amitabh Bachchan’s dad, Harvansh Rai Bachchan, also used to participate with his Hindi rachnaayeN which was very much liked by all.

Anjul March 16, 2016, 8:15pm 11

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Good to know that you are paying a tribute to him in this way :k: