Ishaq Or Kam

goodnews · July 28, 2006, 2:42am

Ktny Achy thy woh log Jo
Ishq ko kam samajhty thy
Yah kam sy ashiqi krty thy
Ham jity ji masroof rhy
Kuch Ishaq kia kuch kam kia
***Ishq Kam k ary ata rha ***
or ishq sy kam uljhta rha
Akhir tang akr ham ny
Donon ko adhura chor diya
{Shair: Faiz Ahmed Faiz}
Sanna please Khubsurat Urdu Rsmulkhat Inyat krna is Nazm k liy.Shukriya.

Sannan · July 28, 2006, 3:34am

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I made 2 correction in it or someone else please let me know ....

Woh Loog Buhat KhushQismat Thay
Jo Ishaq Ko Kaam Samjhthay thay
Ya Kaam Say Aashqi Kartay Thay
Hum Jeetay Ji Masroof Rahay
Kuch Ishaq Kia , Kuch Kaam Kia
Kam Ishaq Kay Aray Aata Raha
Aur Ishaq Say Kam Uljhta Raha
*Phir Tang Aa Kar Hum Nay *
Donoon Ko Udhora Chore Diya

goodnews · July 28, 2006, 3:37am

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Mujhy yad nahi Almost 11 years k bad tu bhli bisri shairi yad krni or likhni shuro ki hy.Thanks for correction

Sannan · July 28, 2006, 3:54am

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**No problem No problem keep it up
Here is urdu version …

**

goodnews · July 28, 2006, 7:18am

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Shukrn Jaziln, yeh kmal krty kysy hu minton main:confused:

K337 · December 3, 2007, 8:48pm

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:@:Gn ki frist thread

Starlight · December 3, 2007, 11:30pm

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itnay long arsay kaliye alwida kyu kaha poetry kon?

NikamiJano · December 4, 2007, 2:11am

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nice sharing goodnews ap k paas kitnay star haiN aur nikami k pass aik

goodnews · December 4, 2007, 2:15am

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Thanks. Ap ky bhi do sitary ho giay ab tu

goodnews · December 4, 2007, 2:18am

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Han aisa hi hai, America a ker bas shairi bhollny ka kam hi kia:(

NikamiJano · December 4, 2007, 2:25am

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thanks aik se 2 bana dala ab 3 kab banay ghi blush: ap b amreeka maiN hoti kahaN?

Dushwari · December 4, 2007, 2:59am

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nice. i never knew this of Faiz.
best,
Dushwari

Azad · December 4, 2007, 3:29am

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Akhir tang akr ham ny
Donon ko adhura chor diya

khoob :k:

Prince_Ali · December 4, 2007, 4:57am

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bohut khub GN!

goodnews · December 4, 2007, 5:01am

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Sannan could you please upload that image again:(

goodnews · December 4, 2007, 5:01am

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:D Thanks 4 bringing it up again:D

Prince_Ali · December 4, 2007, 5:09am

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^usko warning to nahi milay gi na :(

Shab-e-Hijar · December 4, 2007, 6:10am

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abhi nahi but next time …

Pareshan0 · December 4, 2007, 6:28am

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nice :(

redidentity · December 4, 2007, 6:29am

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buhat achi nazm hai.. mujhe buhat pasand hai

thnx for sharing