is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Paglee · February 1, 2003, 4:35am

lamhaY wo aiyeN gaiN jo ab taak sunay nahi
wo dard tum saho gaye jo hum ne shahay nahi

in sabaz moasmooN maiN kareN kis pe aytabaaR?
paat-jhar rutooN k zakham be ab taak bharay nahi

barsoN se sochtey hiaN k tujhay bhool jaien hum
is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

wo kam naseeb us se jo bichray they aik baar
kahna usay k log wo ab taak basay nahi

maayusioN ki taiz hawaein chali haiN laakh
depaak meRi umeed k lakin bujhay nahi

Guest7777 · February 1, 2003, 4:39am

Well said .... and welcome :)

Azad · February 1, 2003, 4:40am

bohut khoob :k:

Welcome

Ana · February 1, 2003, 4:41am

Lovely. Deepak jalai rakhna. Who wrote this verse btw?

WiseGuy · February 1, 2003, 4:48am

Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Bohat Khoob Paglee,
welcome to the GupShup :k:

BanJaraa · February 1, 2003, 5:17am

Welcome Paglee.....

Ab samaj aai posting main itni der kion lagi..... ;)

Pagleeeee.... execptnionaly nice.... :)

thanxxxx for sharing.... who is the poet?

chand_chehra · February 1, 2003, 7:19am

Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

very nice paglee g :k:thanks for sharing
welcome to GS

Azam_1 · February 1, 2003, 8:08am

:k: :k:

Dilsay · February 1, 2003, 8:21am

Well said and welcome....

Dragon_King · February 1, 2003, 10:16am

:k:

BrokenSky · February 1, 2003, 12:21pm

great stuff:k:…

Pyara_sa_doost · February 1, 2003, 1:42pm

nice stuff :k:

Amal · February 1, 2003, 7:09pm

Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

Bohat khoob:k:…By the way, do you still need a
welcome after spending so much time on gupshup?

nikii · February 1, 2003, 8:46pm

bhut khoob :k:
welcome to GS

WiseGuy · February 1, 2003, 9:07pm

Re: Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

LOL Amal, you’re right…

Magar woh kabhi kabhi kisika ka khush aamdeed kehna acha lagta hai
Hum yahi soch key baar baar is mehfil main roop badal badal ker aaye

Paglee · February 1, 2003, 10:27pm

thanks u allllllllll jinhon ne hamin welcome kia aru jinhon ne nahi kia un ka be shukria...:)kitnay achai hain sab pagloon ko be kitna welcome kartey...soooo nice of u allll..:)

Pyara_sa_doost · February 1, 2003, 10:29pm

gr8 one :k:

Paglee · February 1, 2003, 10:31pm

Re: Re: Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

wise g ab har ik ka dil ap ki tahra wise thora he hona hia har koi hamin dekh k ap ki tarha khsuh thora he ho gha

Paglee · February 1, 2003, 10:33pm

Re: Re: is sooch per amal k magaR hoslay nahi

shukria shukria is izat afzaie ka…

teeR kha k dekha jo kameeN gha ki taRaf
apnay he dostooN se mulaqat ho gaye..

Paglee · February 1, 2003, 10:39pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by BanJaraa: *
Welcome Paglee.....

Ab samaj aai posting main itni der kion lagi..... ;)

Pagleeeee.... execptnionaly nice.... :)

thanxxxx for sharing.... who is the poet?
[/QUOTE]

haan na ab Paglee koi aisa wesa thora he karey ghi post..:)wo post karnay main thora dairi thei ab hamarey pass koi baat he nahi hoti tu kia baat karen :)