is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

NikamiJano · September 5, 2002, 8:58pm

*** aieY meraY ahsaas-e-janooN kia mujhaY daina? dar'eeYa usaY bakhsha tu sehRa mujhaY daiNa?

jab waQat ki muR’jaieY huwei shaaKh sambhaloO
is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

choo jaieY huwaa jis se tu khushboO teRi aieY
jateY huweY ik zakham tu aisa mujhaY daiNa

shaab bhaR ki musafat hai gawahi ki talbGaaR
aieY subha-e-safaR apna sitaRa mujhaY daiNa

ek daRd ka maila k laga hai dil-o-jaaN maiN
ek rooh ki awaaZ k “raasta mujhaY daiNa”

ek taaZa gazal aazaN-e-sukhaaN maanG rehi hia
tum aapna mehaktaa huwa lehjaa mujhaY daiNa

wo muj se kahiN bhaR k musebaT maiN tha “Mohsin”
rah rah k maGar is ka dilaasa mujhaY daiNa

chand_chehra · September 5, 2002, 9:20pm

Re: is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

wowww jano gi kya baat hai very very veryyyyyy nice

_TaNhAyAaN · September 5, 2002, 10:06pm

nice indeed! :)

NikamiJano · September 5, 2002, 10:53pm

Re: Re: is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

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*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

wowww jano gi kya baat hai very very veryyyyyy nice :)
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hey chando:) g maaR dala tusi nay ani tareef kaR k :)

NikamiJano · September 5, 2002, 10:54pm

thanks tanhayaan sis and welcome on ma boat …

_TaNhAyAaN · September 5, 2002, 11:17pm

thank you dear, just wondering do you write poetries by yourself too? :)

SunnyBoy · September 6, 2002, 1:52am

Buhat khoob :k:

Pramod · September 6, 2002, 6:37am

ek daRd ka maila k laga hai dil-o-jaaN maiN
ek rooh ki awaaZ k "raasta mujhaY daiNa"

ek taaZa gazal aazaN-e-sukhaaN maanG rehi hia
tum aapna mehaktaa huwa lehjaa mujhaY daiNa

wo muj se kahiN bhaR k musebaT maiN tha "Mohsin"
rah rah k maGar is ka dilaasa mujhaY daiNa

Bahot Khub Bahna. Nice choice to share. Thank u.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 6, 2002, 7:31am

Nice Choice Nj sis Thanks for sharing :~)

NikamiJano · September 6, 2002, 7:13pm

thanks SB and G-e-T.............:)

NikamiJano · September 6, 2002, 7:15pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
ek daRd ka maila k laga hai dil-o-jaaN maiN
ek rooh ki awaaZ k "raasta mujhaY daiNa"

ek taaZa gazal aazaN-e-sukhaaN maanG rehi hia
tum aapna mehaktaa huwa lehjaa mujhaY daiNa

wo muj se kahiN bhaR k musebaT maiN tha "Mohsin"
rah rah k maGar is ka dilaasa mujhaY daiNa

Bahot Khub Bahna. Nice choice to share. Thank u.
[/QUOTE]

thanku thanku Pra g ... keep smiling...:)

nikii · September 6, 2002, 7:20pm

:k: zaberdast niakami janu ji

Amal · September 6, 2002, 7:37pm

Re: is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

Bohat khoob NikamiJik:

NikamiJano · September 8, 2002, 12:21pm

Re: Re: is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

thanks ** Amal ** Sahib…

and thanks niki:)

hanie · September 10, 2002, 7:44am

wicked…

*jab waQat ki muR’jaieY huwei shaaKh sambhaloO
is shaakh se toOta huwa lamha mujhaY daiNa

wo muj se kahiN bhaR k musebaT maiN tha “Mohsin”
rah rah k maGar is ka dilaasa mujhaY daiNa

zabardast haye …

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 10, 2002, 8:56am

zabar10 heay