is rait k zarooN ne mil kar ik naam kia tahreer tu kia

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal July 20, 2006, 1:48am 1

kuch be-tarteeb sitarooN ne palkooN ko kia taskheer tu kia wo shaks nazar bhar ruk na saka ahsaas tha daman geer tu kia

kuchy bantey mit-tey daa’eray se ik shakal hazarooN tasveeraiN
sab naqash-o-nigar arooj pe they aankhaiN theiN zawal pazeer tu kia

khush hooN k kisi mehfil maiN arzaa’N thei mitah bedaari
ab aankhaiN haiN be-khvab tu kia ab khavab haiN be-tabeer tu kia

sehra-e-tamana maiN jis k jeenay ka jawaz he jhoonkay hooN
is rait k zarooN ne mil kar ik naam kia tahreer tu kia

likhta hooN tu poorooN se dil taak ik chandni se chaa jati hai
“Qasir” wo halal haraf kabhi ho paa’ey na ma’hey munir tu kia

Sannan July 20, 2006, 3:09am 2

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sehra-e-tamana maiN jis k jeenay ka jawaz he jhoonkay hooN
is rait k zarooN ne mil kar ik naam kia tahreer tu kia

:k:

usman22 July 20, 2006, 3:49am 3

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acha hai

mahamkhan July 20, 2006, 8:41am 4

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nice....

Kush Fehmi Ya ???

Bholay_Bisray July 20, 2006, 12:49pm 5

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Beautiful choice!

tum to shaayar ho 'Qateel' aur vo ik aam saa shaKhs
us ne chaahaa bhii tujhe aur jataayaa bhii nahii.n

Aryaan July 20, 2006, 1:24pm 6

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Bohat khoob Koyal...:)

Prince_Ali July 20, 2006, 2:53pm 7

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Very nice :k:

Zamil July 20, 2006, 10:35pm 8

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It need some corrections;
Khush hoon k kisi ki mehfil mein arzaaN thi mataa-e-bedaari
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Sehraa-e-tamanna mein jin k jeene ka jawaaz hi jhonke hon
Un reit k zarroN ne mil kar ik naam kia tehreer to kya
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Qaisar wo hilaal-e-harf kabhi ho paaye na maah-e-muneer to kya

*As usual, zabardast...:) *

Challenge for BH, E6 & NV

Shab-e-Hijar July 21, 2006, 5:06pm 9

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hmmm

Shab-e-Hijar July 21, 2006, 5:07pm 10

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hehhe ab agaye samjh
very nicee koyal jano :-)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 21, 2006, 7:10pm 11

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Nice stuff Koyal, kahansey lay kar aati roz ro new poetry:~)

Bholay_Bisray July 21, 2006, 8:17pm 12

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Copy Paste , but choice aachi hay Koyal ki

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:17pm 13

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:halo: tu ap keon nahi kartey asi copy pastaiN..me tu parh parh k lubti… aur phir urdu ko roman main likhti itna tame laga k

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:18pm 14

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dhoodnday tu Rub b mil jata gul ye tu phir ik zara se poetry hia ..thanks 4 likinig :)

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:19pm 15

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shabo g kia samjnay ki koshish kar rehi itni simple tu me batin kar rehi :D

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:20pm 16

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lice ki medison chaiey ap ko i do have clown:

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:21pm 17

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thanks zamil per ye tu ap ko shaa'er ko letter likhna parey gha k ap ne us ki poetry ki hajamat ki hai :D

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:22pm 18

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thanks arian :)

Koyal July 21, 2006, 10:23pm 19

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thanks PK

ullujii July 22, 2006, 1:04am 20

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very nice and beautyfull :)