reet
1
jin raastoN se tum aaye hamarey dil tak
un rastoN se kisi ko guzernay nahiN dia
bethi hooN aaj bhi mein waqt tham ker
mein ne usey bhi fasla kernay nahiN dia
in haath ki lakeeroN ko is tarah se rakhha
ham ne tumharey naam ko mitney nahiN dia
kagaz per apney dil ke likha tera naam aur
qalam tore dia aur kuch nia likhney nahiN dia
barish hai, ek lerki hai aur khulee sarek
lekin teray khayal ne bikhernay nahiN dia
koi to hai jis ki her dua men mein hooN
is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
kagaz per apney dil ke likha tera naam aur
qalam tore dia aur kuch nia likhney nahiN dia
Nice one Reet 
system
4
umar bhar liktay rahay phir bhi waraq sadah raha
janay wo kia lafz thay jo hum say tehreer na howay
m_kamal
6
koi to hai jis ki her dua men mein hooN
is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
behtarin
bhout achee…yu have got talent keep it up 
sokoon
10
Hi!
Reet amad hai. good very good
reet
16
Re: is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
thnx to all…
fizion
17
Re: is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
inspired from original poem!
suni bataain tau hum nay hain duniya say
laikin phir be tumany dil say nikalnay nah dia
Daanie
18
Re: is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
buhut khoob..
Re: is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
reallyy really nice.. love the last shair..
reet
20
Re: is ek guman ne mujhay mernay nahiN dia
thnkew everyone…