Is Dunia ki Reet Anokhi

***Is dunia ki reet anokhi kaise hen anjane log
pathar le ke dorte hen dil walon pe barsane log

kaise dukhon ke mausam ahe kaisi aag lagi he yaro
ab sehrahon se laaten hen pholon ke nazrane log

jante hen ke ishaq musalsal rog he khud azari he
phir bhi us ke kooche men jate hen umar ganwane log***

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v.nice..

Pr@yerz..

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thanx

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very nice sharing

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v.nice......!

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Nice Sharin

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Good One Tere_Naam...

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mashkoor jee

mushkoor hussain yaad??

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:lajawab:

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mushkoor hussain yaad??<!-- google_ad_section_end --> <!-- / message -->

nai bus mashkoor mean thanx jee

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wah, short but touching.


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aapkii pesh kardah Ghazal nazar navaaz huii aur bahooot lutandoz huaa magar tashnagii rah gaii kiuN k Ghazal mukammil nahiiN :(

aapne lafz "mashkoor" ba_ma'nii "shukria" ke likhaa hai jab kyeh Ghalat-ul-aam hai jo k ab Ghalat-ul-'awaam bantaa jaa rahaa hai. mashkoor kaa matlab huaa "jis par shukr adaa kiyaa gayaa ho" [the one who has been thanked and NOT the one who thanks]. agar aap kisii kaa shukria adaa karna chaaheN to aapko kahna chaahiye "mutashakkir" yaa "shukr-guzaar huN". ummeed hai k vazaaHat ho gaii hogii merii is muKhtasir taus'ee se. shukran**
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Shukria janab tasseh aisi hui ustad jee qibla ke ab ghalati ki to gunjaish hi nai he. :bb:

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wah ji wah