kyaa Khabar thii ke mai.n is darjaa badal jaa_uu.Ngaa
tujh ko kho duu.Ngaa tere Gam se sambhal jaa_uu.Ngaa
ajanabii ban ke miluu.Ngaa mai.n tujhe mahafil me.n
tuu ne chhe.Dii bhii to mai.n baat badal jaa_uu.Ngaa
Dhuu.NDh paaye na jahaa.N yaad bhii terii mujh ko
aise jangal me.n kisii roz nikal jaa_uu.Ngaa
zid me.n aaye hue maasuum se bachche kii tarah
Khud hii kashtii ko Dubone pe machal jaa_uu.Ngaa
.
try this URL to see some thing new in Poetry Section…
rzserv2.fh-lueneburg.de/~lg013455/flash/Poetry/poem.swf
wowww bhai its awesomeee :k:
thanko for sharing
Dilsay
December 17, 2002, 7:00pm
4
Great
Very nice.... thanks for sharing
MAYAZ
December 17, 2002, 7:09pm
5
achii haiii....
i think its having some links to Arif awan's poems ;)
Wowwwwwwwwwww zzabardast......Et..hamin kia pata hamarey yahan anay se itnay badak jaien gain ap :(..but it's a great job.....)badlnay wali nahi....poetry wali :p
nice work:k: AC
NJ kaisi ho aap..kahan ho aaj kal? .. koyi post hi maro yara
Pramod
December 20, 2002, 8:11pm
13
Nice one.
thanks for sharing...
Thanx every one!
PS for NJ:- main nahi bahtka :)
PS for CC:- wait for more ;)
PS for MAYAZ :- didnt get ur question, sorry...
PS for Rameesha :- shukreya, aur NJ Post maarti nahi hain bulkay aanaeyat furmaati hain :p
PS for Mod! :- shukreya :)
nikii
December 21, 2002, 10:46pm
16
Re: is darjaa badal jaa_uu.Ngaa
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *
kyaa Khabar thii ke mai.n is darjaa badal jaa_uu.Ngaa
tujh ko kho duu.Ngaa tere Gam se sambhal jaa_uu.Ngaa
ajanabii ban ke miluu.Ngaa mai.n tujhe mahafil me.n
tuu ne chhe.Dii bhii to mai.n baat badal jaa_uu.Ngaa
Dhuu.NDh paaye na jahaa.N yaad bhii terii mujh ko
aise jangal me.n kisii roz nikal jaa_uu.Ngaa
zid me.n aaye hue maasuum se bachche kii tarah
Khud hii kashtii ko Dubone pe machal jaa_uu.Ngaa
.
try this URL to see some thing new in Poetry Section…
rzserv2.fh-lueneburg.de/~lg013455/flash/Poetry/poem.swf
bhut zaberdast :k:
thxs 4 sharing
bhut khooobb :k:
thxs 4 sharing