main bus cha rahi thee k or loug bhi likh lain…i mean all other participants wrote like the one we write in skools…try to be formal..prolly mujhay dekh ker someone wana express a biased essay!
but i am glad i wrote what i always wanted to write in my xams, but never wrote cuz of the dogmaz.
First of all .. I was bit disappointed with the amount of entries we received On Allama Iqbal … But I comprehend that it happened because most of the café people may haven’t read or heard about him .. I hope to see an increase in future competitions…
Moderators should have taken part as well … we had two competition with different themes , what I reckon is .. one big competition for Gs crowd …. May be Next year Insallah ….
So far I am very happy with this experiment … it is indeed high time that we should introduce our Heroes to our young generation .. Doing it in café was a successful attempt in this regard …
I am judging one in poetry forum ( yes I aint an authority of IQBAL … But some body has to do it ) …. The one and only objection I have …. Regarding entries …. I will be mentioning it in poetry forum as well …
Most of entries are written without citations or referencing … Some thing , which we may call plagiarism .. In a nutshell … I believe some of them are close imitation of the language and thoughts of other authors. And we shouldn’t be doing at any level ….
Kam as kam mujh per yeh Ilzam nahi lagy aja sakta:D Os thread ky liy main ny bari koshish ki ky Pakistan sy hi koi Atiya Faizi ki or Iqbal ki tareekhi pic scan ker ky bhyj dy magar ishq ki trha is pic hasil kerny main bhi nakam rahi:( Or tu or Pakistani bhi keh rahy hain ab Kitab or Akhbar kon perhta hy web per dykhi nahi mili:smack:
First of all .. I was bit disappointed with the amount of entries we received On Allama Iqbal … But I comprehend that it happened because most of the café people may haven’t read or heard about him .. I hope to see an increase in future competitions…
Moderators should have taken part as well … we had two competition with different themes , what I reckon is .. one big competition for Gs crowd …. May be Next year Insallah ….
So far I am very happy with this experiment … it is indeed high time that we should introduce our Heroes to our young generation .. Doing it in café was a successful attempt in this regard …
I am judging one in poetry forum ( yes I aint an authority of IQBAL … But some body has to do it ) …. The one and only objection I have …. Regarding entries …. I will be mentioning it in poetry forum as well …
Most of entries are written without citations or referencing … Some thing , which we may call plagiarism .. In a nutshell … I believe some of them are close imitation of the language and thoughts of other authors. And we shouldn’t be doing at any level ….
Yeah, I think we did good for our first attempt. It's Ok to give reference as long as you don't claim it as your own, which no-one did. If you are talking about the poetry and works of a poet, it is perfectly in order to refer to his work. I think all of you did a great job keeping the flow.
I also agree that while this was a starting point, we will bring on more opportunities for people to participate in and hopefully educate ourselves in our rich heritage.
Why Mods didn't participate? Mods kissi kaam kay nahiN haiN!:D
Niki jhoti kahin ki Aik sheeda tali hi reh giya Imran Khan bhi keh sakti hu:wink:Ky chalo bandy ka dill tu na dehly soch ker mazi ka sahih that tu hay Immi hay immo:D
"Nikki, tum logon nai achay prizes chunay hain, lekin ek baat kahoon k agar tum meray liyay ek kaam kar sakti ho to zindagi bhar tunhara ehsaan nahin bhuloon gi. Ek daafa, sirf ek daafa apni dost key liye Sheikh Rashid kay saath ek mulaqaat karwa do. Allah tumhe bohot khushian dega."