*intezar*

Ek Muhabbat Hai, Aur Uski Ek Nishani Hain
Ek Dil Hai, Jaise Koi Haveli Purani Hain

Safar Raat Ka Hai, Raat Bhi Toofani Hain
Samandar Hi Samandar Hain, Kashti Bhi Doob Jani Hain

Ibteda-e-ishq se Inteha-e-ishq tak
Mai Hi Tha Bewafa, Maine Hi Wafa Nibhani Hain

Mai Laut Aya Ho Manzil Ko Dekh Kar
Udhar To Yaaro Veerani Hi Veerani Hain

Yeh Intezar Khatm Kyun Nahi Hota “Zahid”
Kisi Se Poocho Akhir Maut Kab Aani Hain

SinlneR

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Ibteda-e-ishq se Inteha-e-ishq tak
Mai Hi Tha Bewafa, Maine Hi Wafa Nibhani Hain

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very nice

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thanx bheegiyaad. . .

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buhat hi zabardast....thanks for sharing.......

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very nice and touching

ye shair khoob hai

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zaraaa sa rhythm men kami hay lekin phr b bht achi poem hay.

Thanks soo much for appreciating..

Thank u soo much dear..

hmm.. thanks chacha ghalib jee..
bas haalaat aese they to likh dia..

: )

hmmm.. n dear abeeha jee.. apke comments ka to mein wait karta ho.

well. i am sad ke i was not gain up to ur expectations..
but thanx alot for ur true comments.. i really appreciate it..

i will try to fix the rhythem too.. bas apki thori madad chahie hogi i guess..

...

any ways.. thank u all..

Bohat khoob SinlneR...

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buhut......khoob

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^ thank u soo much dear

thanx aryaan. and s.786