Intezar.

Shahana · April 20, 2006, 6:08am

** Intizaar **

sarmaee hwa ki kshboo si
aangan main ootarti ho jaisay

or Haar Singhaar k pholoon nay
ik frsh bechhaya ho mn main

phir bojhal bojhal taiz hwa
kshboo si ordati phirti ho

hr aahatt par dil ddrdk ddrdk
dekhay hay khhulay dr ki janib

tum aao gay tum aao gay
ik chaap si mujh say khti hay

shan

sara_farooqui · April 20, 2006, 6:57am

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acha likha hai,, shahana,,, but apki Roman thpri si weak hai,, is ko sahi ker lijiye,,,,

sara_farooqui · April 20, 2006, 7:01am

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surmayi hawa ki khushboo si **
**aangan main utarti ho jaisey

or Haar Singhaar ka pholoon nay
ik farsh bechhaya ho man main

phir bojhal bojhal teiz hawa
khushboo si uraati phirti ho

her aahatt par dil dharek dharek
dekhay hay khulay derwazey ki janib

tum aao gay tum aao gay
ik chaap si mujh say kehti hay

being_lonely · April 20, 2006, 11:35am

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pyariii hi :)

Shahana · April 20, 2006, 12:43pm

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Thanks Sarah Farooqi for your help. Yes my roman urdu is not that good.

Thanks Being Lonely.

Here is in Urdu Font also illustrated, Enjoy it.

Amal · April 20, 2006, 5:43pm

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Very nicely put Shahana :k: … Thanx for sharing it with us…image meiN parrhney meiN ziaada mazaa aya…sara ki baat par dhiyaan zaroor dijeeye ga

Amal · April 20, 2006, 5:46pm

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HeArT_HaCKeR · April 20, 2006, 8:39pm

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lovely :k:

ASA · April 21, 2006, 2:54am

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very nice… :k:

Shahana · April 22, 2006, 12:26pm

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Thanks a lot Amal. Yes, I will certainly think upon her suggestion. Well, just wanted to add that it is illustrated by my daughter Maria, she is an artist.

Thanks HH and ASA.