inteha kar don

Azad · December 21, 2002, 7:49pm

Aaj sajdoon ki inteha kar don
Shooq miT jay ya jabeen na rahay

koii janta hay shair kon hay?

arifnawaz1 · December 21, 2002, 7:55pm

Bahut khoob :k:

Wohi bikhray baal aur aankh bhi num
Ab kyon deewaana aaya hai
Abhi shaam howi naa Shamma jali hai
Kyon Parwaana aaya hai

Jaan_Lewaa · December 21, 2002, 11:22pm

bhut khoob:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2002, 3:03am

nice:k:

Azad · December 22, 2002, 6:42am

[QUOTE]
Kyon Parwaana aaya hai
[/QUOTE]

Janum janum koi milta raha bichaRta raha
Janum janum koi Anjum~ sazain dayta raha

CoOL_NetizeN · December 22, 2002, 6:48am

Azad sahab Dono shair buhat ala hein
aur arif jee aap ka qata bhee khoobsoorat hay :k:

chand_chehra · December 22, 2002, 6:50am

Azad and aarif gi :k:

Azad · December 22, 2002, 7:03am

Nawazish

arfinawaz
Jaan Lewaa
ghazal kisi ke
CoOL~NetizeN
chand_chehra

Dilsay · December 22, 2002, 11:31am

Simply great

Azad jee

I just have something to say...

I have noticed that it is very rear that you post something most of the times you just comment... and your comments are always nice... what i am trying to say here is that my feelings are that you read each and every post with bottom of your heart and that is why when you comment one can feel it...

Nice to know that someone is reading in that way.....

Thanks for your comments .....

guybrush · December 22, 2002, 1:45pm

very nice :k:

Capricorn · December 22, 2002, 3:52pm

Re: inteha kar don

Shair buhat acha hai..shair ka mujhe bhee naheen pata
arif nice contribution :k:

system · December 22, 2002, 5:06pm

:k: :k: :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · December 22, 2002, 5:26pm

:k: nice

Azad · December 22, 2002, 5:49pm

Re: Simply great

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Azad jee

I just have something to say...

I have noticed that it is very rear that you post something most of the times you just comment... and your comments are always nice... what i am trying to say here is that my feelings are that you read each and every post with bottom of your heart and that is why when you comment one can feel it...

Nice to know that someone is reading in that way.....

Thanks for your comments .....
[/QUOTE]

shooq ke saray kam hum ** dilsay ** kartay hain yeh or baat hay humain khud nahi maloom ke humara dil kahan hay.
Zara nawazi hay aap ki aap nay humain achay lafzon main yaad karnay ke kabil jana. darasal aap khud dil ke achay hain is liay aap ko sub achay nazar aatay hain.

Aap ki nazar
Socha tha bichaR kar woh sisakti rahi hogi
Daikha to nay ghar ki sajawaT main maghan thi

(Tasleem)

& Thank you
HeArT HaCKeR
*** Vivacious ***
Capricorn
guybrush