Please agar Kissi Dost ke Pass Inshaa Jee ki Nazoom ,Ghazliyaat ya Mazameen hoN to wo please iss thread meiN Post karein but please sirf Inshaa jee ki
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jazakallah
Mera jahaN tak khaiyaal hai wo NazmoN ke shayar they ? right?
Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat
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us shaam vo ruKhsat kaa samaa.N yaad rahegaa
us shaam vo ruKhsat kaa samaa.N yaad rahegaa
vo shahar vo kuuchaa vo makaa.N yaad rahegaa
vo Tiis ki ubharii thii idhar yaad rahegii
vo dard ke uThaa thaa yahaa.N yaad rahegaa
ham shauq ke shole kii lapak bhuul jaaye.nge
vo shamaa-e-fasurdaa kaa dhuaa.N yaad rahegaa
kuchh miir ke abyaat the kuchh faiz ke misare
ik dard kaa thaa jin me.n bayaa.N yaad rahegaa
jaa.N baKhsh sii thii us gul_barg kii taraavaat
vo lams-e-aziiz-e-do-jahaa.N yaad rahegaa
ham bhuul sake hai.n na tujhe bhuul sake.nge
tuu yaad rahegaa hame.n haa.N yaad rahegaa
Enjoy …
Want some more
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kal chaudhavii.n kii raat thii shab bhar rahaa charchaa teraa
kal chaudhavii.n kii raat thii shab bhar rahaa charchaa teraa
kuchh ne kahaa ye chaa.Nd hai kuchh ne kahaa cheharaa teraa
ham bhii vahii.n maujuud the ham se bhii sab puuchhaa kiye
ham ha.Ns diye ham chup rahe manzuur thaa pardaa teraa
is shahar me.n kis se mile.n ham se to chhuuTii mahafile.n
har shaKhs teraa naam le har shaKhs diivaanaa teraa
kuuche ko tere chho.D kar jogii hii ban jaaye.n magar
jangal tere parbat tere bastii terii saharaa teraa
ham aur rasm-e-bandagii aashuftagii uftaadagii
ehasaan hai kyaa kyaa teraa ai husn-e-beparvaa teraa
do ashk jaane kis liye palko.n pe aa kar Tik gaye
altaaf kii baarish terii ikraam kaa dariyaa teraa
ai bedaareG-o-be_amaa.N ham ne kabhii kii hai fuGaa.N
ham ko terii vahashat sahii ham ko sahii saudaa teraa
tuu bevafaa tuu maharabaa.N ham aur tujh se bad-gumaa.N
ham ne to puuchhaa thaa zaraa ye vaqt kyuu.N Thaharaa teraa
ham par ye saKhtii kii nazar ham hai.n faqiir-e-rah_guzar
rastaa kabhii rokaa teraa daaman kabhii thaamaa teraa
haa.N haa.N terii suurat hasii.n lekin tuu aisaa bhii nahii.n
is shaKhs ke ashaar se shoharaa huaa kyaa kyaa teraa
beshak usii kaa dosh hai kahataa nahii.n Khaamosh hai
tuu aap kar aisii davaa biimaar ho achchhaa teraa
bedard sunanii ho to chal kahataa hai kyaa achchhii Gazal
aashiq teraa rusavaa teraa shaayar teraa “Inshaa” teraa
UFF thaanxx shukriaaa
Aap to mashaallah bazauq haiN…maiN kHamkHaa aap se ulajh raha tha shukriaa
JAZZAK ALLAH UFF sahibaa
Jazakallah
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so sweet
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Pleasee aurrr bhiiii i will write it down
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))))))
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Bohaat bohaat meharbaani
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**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
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pehlay ye tu batain Ibn-e- insha ne aap ka bigaara kia hai ke aap un ke kalaam ke peechay hain In dinoon ?
yeh acHa sawaal kyia aapne jiska jawaab hamare pass sire se maujood hi nahiN, wesse unhooN ne aapka keya bigaarh diya , jo aap ke pass unki collection hai
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**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
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my favs:
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ps: uff nice choice
Un ko tu choorain aaap Poetry section main keya kur raahi hain
bohot khuab. pls jo aap ney urdu mey likha aur sabh writers ko jo urdu mey sirf likhtye hia kaffi shuks essye jiney urdu ho skata hia read karna atta ho. kaffi kuch miss kar jattey hia .sirf request hai unkaye baarey mey be soch jaye jabh aap likhye also pls write in english 2
shukariya
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Originally posted by Almi:
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bohot khuab. pls jo aap ney urdu mey likha aur sabh writers ko jo urdu mey sirf likhtye hia kaffi shuks essye jiney urdu ho skata hia read karna atta ho. kaffi kuch miss kar jattey hia .sirf request hai unkaye baarey mey be soch jaye jabh aap likhye also pls write in english 2
shukariya**
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NahiN Khel aey "DaagH" YaaroN se kah do
keh aati hai Urdu Zubaa.N aate aate
*Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
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raat ke Khvaab sunaye'N kis ko raat ke Khvaab suhaneY the
dhundhale dhundhale chehareY the paR sab jaane pahachaneY the
zidi vahshi alhaR chanchal miTheY log rasileY log
honTh uN ke GazaloN ke misare aaNkhoN meiN afsaneY the
ye laRki to in galiyooN meiN roz hi ghuma karti thi
is se uN ko milna tha to is ke laakh bahaneY the
ham ko saaRi raat jagayaa jalteY bujhteY taaroN ne
ham kyuN uN ke daR pe utareY kitneY aur ThikaneY the
vahashat ki unvaan hamari in meiN se jo naaR bani
dekhengeY to log kahengeY 'Insha' ji dewaneY the
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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
Thanx
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Nikamijano sahibaaa
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its so nice
aur bohaat hi Umdaa Kalaam hai Jazaakkallah sab doston kaa jo meri itni care aur maddad kar rahe haiN
**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **
Amjad, kia merey yahaan aanay ke liay mujhay visa lena hoga Aap se ?
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I do have interest i Poetry BTW
sab ko dil k daaG dekahieY aik tujhi ko dekha na sakaY
teRa damaN dooR nahi tha hath maiN phaila na sakaY
tu aieY dost kahaN lay aia chahRa ye khursheed-e-jamal
seenaY maiN abad karaN gaiN ankhooN maiN tu sama na sakaY
na tuj se kuch hum ko nisbat na tuj ko kuch hum se kaam
hum ko ye maloom tha lakiN dil ko hum samja na sakaY
ab tuj se kis mu se kah daiN saat samnadaR paaR na ja
beech ki ik dewaaR be hum tu phaand na paa'eY dha na sakaY
muN papi ki ujRi khaati sookhi ki sookhi he rahi
ummdaaY badal garjaY badal do boondiaN barsa na sakaY*
~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
thanks any time tasneeef Saheeb…
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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~
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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **
Salaam Tassneef humney tu essliye kaha tha yea jurari niahi her kisi ko urdu read karni atti ho. agar aap ko acha niahi laga tu hum maffi chahtye hia aap sey..
Assalamo alaikum
NahiN Alami Sahibaa maiN ne wo sher iss lyie Arz kyia thaa keh Urdu seekhni chahiye..asaani se to hargiz nahIn aaigi aap Dilbardaashta na hoN..yeh ahisa ahistaa aa hi jaaigi inshallah AUR aiigi bhi kiouN nahiN..agar aapko shaqu hai to yaqeenan aaigi inshallah ..kioun Internet aj aik aissa mediaa hai jisske zariaa insaan apne Shauq ke mutaabiq taleem Hasil akr sakta hai.
Kehne ka bass yahi maqsad tha keh Urdu Zubaan Mushkil hai aate aate hi aaigi na
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Aur LIllaah maiN ne kaabhi kissi baat ka bura nahiN manaiya..mujhey agar koi baar buri lage to maiN Tanz nahi kyia akrta saaf keh detaa hooN
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MaiN aapke lyie aur doosr edoston ke lyie bhi Roman-Urdu mein hio post karne ki koshish akrooNga..
Aur Please wo jo gHalat-Fehmi ham dono ke darmiaan paidaa hogai hai ussko Muaaf kar dijyiega maiN mazrat Chaahtaa hooN (yaqeenan meri hi gHalati thi, keh maiN ne apni baat ko wazahat keh saath pesh nahiN kyia thaa ) lekin i promise you keh mera hargiz maqsad Tanqeed ya Tanz karna nahiN thaa..mujhey seekhne waale log acHey lagte hain aur kHaas taur per wo log jo kHud poocHte hain sharmaye aur jhijhke bagHair..yeh gHalat-Fehmi meri naadaani ki wajah se keh leiN ya meri kam-fehmi ki wajah se , jo bhi aap munaasib samjheiN lekin issko meri Niyaat na samjhiyega
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niyaat emiN meri aissa har giz nahiN thaa.
Jazaakaallah
aur mujehy kHushi hai keh aap ne meri gHalati ki Nishaadn-dehi akr di
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Umeed hai keh aap isske baad uss cHoTi si ghalati ko muaaf kar deingi main aaindaa Ehtiaat karooNgaa inshaallah
aap ke Shauq ko madd-e-Nazar rakhte huwe aapke Shauq ke Mutaabiq aik piyaara sa Sher Arz kartaa hooN..aur yahi Sher mere Dil ka Haal bhi hai ..Aap ki Nazar (shaiyad aap issko suNne ke baad meri nadaani Muaaf kardeiN
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Urdu hai jiskaa Naam hamiN jaante haiN ‘DaagH’
HindustaaN meiN dhoom hamaari ZabaaN ki hai
Dagh Dehalvi ka Zamaana aur thaa aaj to younH kehnaa chaahiyee
Urdu hai jiskaa Naam hameiN jaante haiN “DagH”
Saare JahaaN meiN dhoom hamaari ZabaaN ki hai
Yaqeenan aap ne sahih kaha thaa keh haar kissi ka dil karta hai parhne ko aur kare bhi kioUN na aakHir SheeriN (meeThi) Zubaan jo hui
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Boliye kaissa lagaa aapko Sher, pasand aaiya
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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **
[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited June 29, 2002).]
Chup Chup rahnay waaly loog poetry kidher pussand kurtay hain, aur main tu yeh pooch raha tha kay khair tu hay na… Poetry section ka rukh loog u know kub kurtay hain, na pata ho tu Nikami Janoo say pooch lejeay ga
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anyhow, Welcome here as well !
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[This message has been edited by Amjad Chohan (edited July 01, 2002).]