Inkishaf !

Hi, i m new on this gup shup & enjoing it
here is my Intikhaab ho u will like it.

Na koi wada hay tum say
Koi rishta nibhanay ka
Na koi aur hi dil mai.n
Tahiyya ya irada hay
kai din say magar dil mai.n
ajab uljhan si rehti hay!
Na tum is dasta.n k sarsari kirdar ho koi
Na qissa itna sada hay
Ta.aluq jo mai.n samjha tha
Kaheen us say ziyada hay

Re: Inkishaf !

Nice one and welcome aboard:)

Re: Inkishaf !

Very Nice… Tnx for Sharing…

Welcome to GS Poetry nakhan :flower1:

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Thanks muddii & GS

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is shabnam-e-wafa ko jo dil ki shikist par
ik pal ko aakay roo gai, main dhondhta phira
be-meher aasman kay talay RASM-E-DOOSTI
kis dil may ja k soo gai main dhondhta phira

Re: Inkishaf !

nice :k:

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Boht khoob.. and welcome to GS :)

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thanks SB & HH

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Welcome!
Hua hay Shah ka musahib, Phirey hay itraataa
Warna shehar mein Ghalib ki aabroo kiya hay

Jalaa hay jism jahaaN, Dil bhi jal gya ho ga
Kureedtay ho jo ub raakh, Justajoo kia hay?

Re: Inkishaf !

Nice one

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good:k:

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Kiya baat hay janab ki & thanks

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JN & JL thanks
by the way these complements for me or for Umer… lols :confused:

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kwahishoon kay aangan meen
shak ki zarad tehni pay
phool bud gumani kay
is tarha say khilty heen
zindagi say pyary bhi
ajnabi say lugty heen

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jo zara kisi nay chera to chilak pareen gay aanso
koi mujh say ye na poochay, mera g udas kiyon hay

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Once again i want to share my 1st post on GS

by Amjad Islam Amjad

Re: Inkishaf !

nakhan welcome and nice entry :)