Indian author Farookh Dhondy wrote Jinnah script

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Diplomat accused over film funds

Appointment of Cambridge academic as high commissioner risks backfiring spectacularly as row erupts over Jinnah script and money

Seumas Milne
Thursday February 17, 2000

When Akbar Ahmed was chosen to be Pakistan’s high commissioner in London by the country’s new military ruler, General Pervez Musharraf, after last October’s coup, the appointment seemed to be a masterstroke by a regime struggling to avoid international isolation.
Here was an unexpectedly respectable frontman for the generals, a Cambridge academic acclaimed for his success in presenting a liberal face of Islam to the west, who might win understanding for the coup leaders’ proclaimed mission to root out corruption in Asia’s new nuclear power.

Three months later, the posting risks backfiring in spectacular fashion as Mr Ahmed faces allegations of wrongful use of funds from a feature film he sponsored about Mohammed Ali Jinnah, the country’s founder, which stars the actor Christopher Lee in the lead role.

He also finds himself at the centre of a bitter dispute over whether he - or the Indian-born, non-Muslim former Channel 4 commissioning editor Farrukh Dhondy - co-wrote the screenplay. Mr Ahmed, who conceived the film as Pakistan’s answer to Richard Attenborough’s Gandhi and acted as executive producer, is accused by the film’s British-based producer, director and co-writer, Jamil Dehlavi, of unjustifiably paying himself more than £50,000 for the script and diverting £70,000 to an offshore bank account to pay his son and son-in-law for jobs they did not carry out.

Mr Dehlavi, who is also suing the high commissioner over the film’s credits and unpaid debts, says Mr Ahmed “did not write a word” of the screenplay, and insists his co-author was Mr Dhondy.

Mr Dhondy has confirmed his role, which he says he was asked to keep secret. He was hired by Mr Ahmed, who asked for some minor amendments to parts of the script which he decided were “not Islamic enough”, he says, and was paid £12,000 for his work.

Mr Ahmed rejects the allegations - though he accepts Mr Dhondy was involved in the screenplay - and insists he has earned nothing from his years of involvement in the £3m Jinnah project.

He says he is preparing to go to the fraud squad with counter-claims about Mr Dehlavi’s handling of the film’s accounts.

The high commissioner says the accusations against him by Mr Dehlavi and Mr Dhondy are part of a campaign by the “Indian lobby” to discredit him and, by extension, the new military regime.

He claims credit for the film’s philosophy and says his collaboration in the script was an essential part of the process.

The eruption of controversy around the film, which is expected to be released in Pakistan in the spring but has yet to be sold in the west, follows a series of bitter disputes during shooting, when it was wrongly alleged at one point that Salman Rushdie, author of The Satanic Verses, was the real scriptwriter.

Jinnah is a revered figure in Pakistan and his portrayal by an actor best known for his role as a Dracula caused outrage in some quarters. The alarmed Pakistani government eventually withdrew £1m from the film.

During its production, Mr Ahmed let it be known that he would take no more than one rupee for his involvement - a claim witnessed by several of those involved in the production. The declaration was in emulation of Jinnah, who took a salary of only one rupee as Pakistan’s first president.

Documents seen by the Guardian confirm that Mr Ahmed was paid £51,500 by QPL, the company he set up to oversee the project, as a “writer’s fee”.

They also show that £35,000 was paid through the film production company to Mr Ahmed’s son, Babar, as co-producer, and another £35,000 to his son-in-law, Arsallah Khan Hoti, as associate producer, into a private family bank account in Jersey in the name of his wife, Zeenat Ahmed, who acted as an unpaid company secretary for QPL.

Mr Ahmed - an author of books and a television series on Islam and an Iqbal fellow, sponsored by the Pakistan government, at Selwyn college, Cambridge, until his recent high commission appointment - rejects all accusations of wrongdoing, as does his wife. They say that they have had to sell jewellery and land to keep the film afloat.

The high commissioner says that, although he paid tax on his £51,500 writer’s fee, he has ploughed the money back into the film, and his executive producer’s fee of £70,000 has been deferred.

He has, he says, taken nothing for his role as head of the project, but like Jinnah, is entitled to his “professional fees”. Future profits will, his spokesman now says, go to an “educational trust”.

Mr Ahmed rejects the claim that he was not co-writer of the script and says his son and son-in-law were fairly paid for work for the film, notably helping to raise hundreds of thousands of pounds from their family.

Their fees have gone back into the project and will entitle them to a share of any profits. All Pakistani legal regulations have, he says, been followed over the Jersey account.

Mr Dehlavi denies that Mr Ahmed’s son or son-in-law played any role in the production. Two other men who worked on the film, production accountant Peter Winstanley and production supervisor Andrew Wood, also insist that neither of the men was to their knowledge involved in any way.

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Pakistan's High Commissioner in London, Akbar Ahmed, is in a spot following confirmation of allegations that the 1998 film Jinnah was co-written by Indian-born Farookh Dhondy. Ahmed, who conceived the film as Pakistan's answer to Sir Richard Attenborough's Gandhi and was its executive producer, has always claimed that he had co-written the script with director Jamil Dehlavi.

Dehlavi, who is now suing the High Commissioner over unpaid bills and the films credits has been quoted in the British press as saying that Ahmed ``did not write a word'' of the script. Ahmed is also reported to have accepted that Dhondy was involved in the screenplay but only in a marginal way.

Dhondy himself has, however, said emphatically: I wrote the script.'' He said he had beenassisted'' by Dehlavi, as is customary for a director. He told Indian newspaper "The Indian Express" that although he was paid just one pound for his copyright, the company formed by Ahmed to make the film contrived to pay me (œ12,000) in different ways''. He said they had paidexpenses'' and for travel to India among other things.

Dhondy said he had a verbal contract'' with Ahmed, whom he has known since they were undergraduate students at Cambridge. Ahmed, he said, asked him not to tell anyone that he had written the script.You are an Indian, not a Muslim, a socialist by reputation and some people in Pakistan think you are anti-Pakistani,'' Ahmed said to him, claimed Dhondy. ``I did not tell anyone, but yesterday I was confronted by The Guardian which said that Ahmed had conceded I had written part of it,'' he said.

Dhondy said he had been reluctant to write the script. I didn't see why they should select an Indian... someone out of sympathy with Pakistan...I was brought up to believe that the division of the country was a tragedy,'' he said. Akbar persuaded him to write the script as adrama'', which he did after reading Wolpert's "Jinnah and Andrew Roberts.

Ahmed, normally more than willing to speak to the Press, was very busy with VIPs'' today. However, he told The Guardian that the accusations against him were part of a conspiracy by theIndian lobby'' to discredit him and, by extension, the new military regime. Dhondy said this was laughable.

Musharraf should not have made Akbar Ahmed High Commissioner. He should have made me (an Indian) High Commissioner for writing a good script,'' he said with his tongue in his cheek.The film was shown to the (Pakistani) military brass...they all clapped...they were clapping for me and not for Akbar Ahmed.''

The controversy does not end here. Ahmed has been accused of misappropriating funds from the film. Jamil Dehlavi has accused him of paying himself a sum of more than œ50,000 for the script. Apart from questions about his contributions if any to the script, Ahmed repeatedly said in public that he was going to pay himself only one pound for his involvement in the project.

He is also alleged to have paid œ35,000 to his son Babar and an equal amount to his son-in-law, Arsallah Khan Hoti, as co-producer and associate producer, respectively. The money was paid into a family bank account in Jersey in the name of Ahmed's wife, Zeenat Ahmed. Ahmed told The Guardian that his son and son-in-law were paid for helping raise funds for the film from their family.

Dehlavi says that neither men had anything to do with the film. Two other men who worked on the film, production accountant Peter Winstanley and production supervisor Andrew Wood, also told The Guardian that neither of the men was involved in any way.

For Ahmed, a Pakistani civil servant who has assiduously cultivated the image of the moderate spokesperson for Islam and Pakistan in the West, becoming High Commissioner _ albeit under a military regime _ was the crowning achievement of his career. For the military regime in Pakistan, the appointment of a supposed ``liberal'' academic was seen as something of a public relations coup at a time of imminent international isolation.

But the controversy over Dhondy's involvement in a film about the founding father of Pakistan and allegation of misuse of funds will raise questions about the appropriateness of the choice of Ahmed as High Commissioner.

The ‘Jinnah’ project- The NEWS

Jamil Dehlavi
http://www.jang.com.pk/thenews/update-index.html

Akbar S Ahmed, Pakistan’s envoy to Britain, has been quoted as saying in an article appearing in the February 18 edition of The News that he “is preparing to go to the fraud squad with counter-claims about Mr (Jamil) Dehlavi’s handling of the accounts” of my film Jinnah. The article, which reproduced the investigations of the Guardian newspaper, made some inaccurate, illogical and even libellous allegations.

The fact is that I have already instituted legal proceedings against Mr Ahmed’s company for monies he owes me, for not crediting me properly in the promotion and publicity of the film which I not only directed but produced and co-wrote, and for not submitting accounts for royalty payments due to me. Clearly I am unable to go into details about this matter since it is sub judice.

When the Guardian’s investigative journalist Seamus Milne revealed that Farrukh Dhondy had co-written the script and that Mr Ahmed had not written a word of it, he should have put his hands up and admitted the truth: of course, the initial idea of making a film on Jinnah was Mr Ahmed’s. I am not denying that. He told Mr Dhondy and me that he wanted to portray Jinnah as a liberal, even secular leader upholding the rights of minorities. True, he recommended that we read certain biographies. True. That he wrote one scene or one line of dialogue. False.

In the said article Mr Ahmed’s accountant, Mohammed Ashraf, says that he has personal knowledge that Mr Ahmed wrote the script as he himself was present at a function in Selwyn College, Cambridge, in 1995 when Akbar Ahmed presented the ‘third script’ to his fellow company directors. What script is he talking about? Farrukh and I wrote the script in 1996. There was an earlier script by Guy Slater, which Akbar Ahmed himself scrapped when he approached Farrukh Dhondy. For creative and copyright reasons, Dhondy refused to even look at this former script. We started from scratch. Mr Ahmed read several drafts of our script which finally became the film. All these drafts still exist, with fixed dates, on Farrukh Dhondy’s computer. Mr Ahmed does not have a single line scene on his.

Mr Ahmed does not deny that he took payment for script-writing for the simple reason that this transaction for £51,5000 to his offshore account in Jersey can and has been traced. He now tells The News that this was necessary “in order to protect his rights as co-writer failing which the other writer could demand the other half of the fee.” What is this supposed to mean?

Mr Ahmed made Mr Dhondy promise he would not reveal the fact that he was involved in the writing and paid him a very much smaller sum in cash. For my role in the script I entered into a contract with Quaid Project Ltd and got a third of what Mr Ahmed received. Who then could claim what fee?

Further, there is the question of £70,000 which Mr Ahmed paid to his son, a student at the time, and to his son-in-law. Having discovered these payments, the Guardian journalist asked Mr Ahmed what these large sums were for. The good professor now claims that his son and son-in-law were fairly paid for work on the film. Any member of the production team will confirm that these individuals had nothing to do with the production. It was after the completion of shooting that Mrs Ahmed wrote to my company asking us for £70,000 to be paid to Akbar Ahmed as his executive producer fee. They instructed the production office to transfer this amount to their personal account in Jersey. Her letter stated that her husband’s invoice would follow. When the invoice did arrive there were two invoices from her son and son-in-law. The same sum was now to be shown in their names. Through this device the executive producer fee payable to Mr Ahmed is still outstanding and on his own admission he is now claiming it as a deferred payment for the film’s profits before the investors get their money back. Even if, as he claims, Mr Ahmed took over £120,000 out of the film’s funds only to put it back, he has extracted the project’s money with his right hand and lent it to the project with his left, using the film’s budget to buy shares in its profit.

Mr Ahmed states that with regard to the offshore Jersey account, all Pakistani legal regulations have been followed. Are Pakistani civil servants or high commissioners allowed to have offshore accounts? As far as the accounts of the film are concerned, they are undoubtedly a matter of public and official interest for Pakistan. Jinnah is not just another film; it is a national project subject to the highest standards.

Mr Ahmed’s accountant Mr Ashraf claims that the accounts were audited by two independent firms of auditors–Brown, McLeod and Berrie and Baker Tilly. I would suggest that journalists should dig more deeply into the relation between Brown McLeod and Berrie and Mr Ashraf who appears to use that firm’s name as his alter ego when it suits him. As for Baker Tilly, they are indeed a reputable firm of film auditors. However, they were not able to audit the accounts which could not be completed by the production accountant Peter Winstanley when funds ran out and he could no longer be paid. The fact remains that there has been no independent audit of this national project’s accounts.

Mr Ashraf tells the paper that I am claiming “a small amount of money still owned to his company Petra which has gone into receivership.” The amount I am claiming is £49,000, the residue for years of dedicated work. This may be a small amount for a rich accountant, but for an independent filmmaker like myself it’s substantial. My company went into receivership because the Quaid Project did not honour a settlement agreement to pay back the credit I had obtained for the production when the Nawaz Sharif government reneged on its agreement to invest £1,000,000 in the film.

Mr Ashraf states that Quaid Project is making a counter-claim of £667,000 for recovery of monies overpaid and wrongly claimed by my company. Ludicrous. How could a reputable accountant like Mr Ashraf have allowed Quaid Project to overpay me almost a third of the budget?

The most childish and absurd reaction from Mr Ahmed in the face of perfectly legitimate and fair questions from the Guardian is that I am part of some “Indian lobby” determined to discredit him. The journalist’s investigation is about money taken out of a film production. I am a Pakistani and proud of it. I welcome the anti-corruption, modernising manifesto of the present government. To be accused of being part of the “Indian lobby” by a supposedly responsible ambassador of our country is laughable. A high commissioner using this unthinking and short-signed response on what will be seen in Britain as a personal rather than a diplomatic matter can only bring our country into disrepute.

May I conclude by stating my view that the use of Farrukh Dhondy in the writing and of Shashi Kapoor and Indira Varma as actors as never seen by me as a weakness of the film, but as living proof that creative Indian artists were willing to participate in what must be seen as a national Pakistani project–one whose integrity it is important to defend. My film Jinnah speaks for itself.

I personally know the accused's son very well indeed and i am sure that this is just Indian propoganda to defame the High commissioner--I know the REAL story but cannot tell you without asking my friend first..read the editorial of Saturday's News International...

Looks like the film may not be released for couple of years , atleast until the issue is resolved in the courts.

Two films, two nations - Editorial

If you want an example of how India and Pakistan differ as nations, then the sagas of the Gandhi and Jinnah films provide a perfect contrast.

The Gandhi film was made by an eminent British director, found international success and won an Oscar as Best Picture
of the year, beating even Steven Spielberg’s ET. There were low-key protests against government financing of the movie
from a few Indian directors and the choice of Ben Kingsley (born Krishna Bhanji) for the lead role was resented by some
actors who worked in Bombay. But the protests quickly dissolved once the film was made and almost everybody agreed
that Kingsley made a brilliant Gandhi. Nobody minded that a foreigner wrote the screenplay or objected to the movie’s other stars — except, of course, the Pakistanis. Pakistan banned the Gandhi film. One of its main objections was that the role of Mohammad Ali Jinnah was played by a relative
unknown (Alyque Padamsee) and that the Qaid-e-Azam had been given a raw deal in the screenplay. It took the Pakistanis
nearly 15 years but eventually, they came up with their reply to Gandhi — an English language movie called Jinnah.
Curiously — in view of their objections to Padamsee — they did not choose a famous Pakistani actor to play Jinnah.

Instead, they hired Christopher Lee, whose chief claim to fame was a 1960’s low budget horror flick called Dracula — Prince of Darkness. Nor were they able to assemble the kind of international team that made Gandhi. They used a Pakistani director and the movie’s guiding spirit, a Cambridge academic called Akbar Ahmed, said he would write
the screenplay himself. Throughout its filming, the movie faced protests from Pakistanis and after it was finally
completed, everybody was unanimous that it would not even approach the success of Gandhi. Thus, it was unloved in its
own country and rejected by the world at large.

Now, Jinnah faces a new controversy. The film’s director has alleged Akbar Ahmed did not really write the screenplay. A
London-based Parsi called Farrukh Dhondy did it. Dhondy agrees that he wrote it but says that he accepted payment in a variety of semi-clandestine methods (air tickets, etc)
because Ahmed told him that he was a non-Muslim and thus could not be seen writing a movie about the founder of Pakistan. Ahmed, who is now General Musharraf’s High
Commissioner to London, faces the double embarrassment of defending himself against allegations of lying as well as
fighting a law suit filed by the film’s director. Indians will find all this bizarre. Nobody here objected when Saeed
Jaffrey, a Muslim, played Sardar Patel in Gandhi or cared about the religion of the script writer. There was no subterfuge, no deceit and no Dracula. Perhaps that is the
difference between our two countries. And that is why Gandhi got an Oscar while Jinnah is stuck in the law courts.

Looks like Akbar Ahmed has been found guilty of malpractise. He has been sacked as Pakistan's UK ambassador.

Re: Indian author Farookh Dhondy wrote Jinnah script

Jinnah Film won the Best Foreign Film Award at the Houston Film Festival in 1999.