Some more of the incomplete lines.
aghoosh-e-qabar mein kitna andhera hoga
murda jism per, sanpoon ka basera hoga
keeroon ne, sanpoon ne, bichoaon ne
jism ke har ik ang ko udhera hoga
hoga hisaab har us gunah ka bhi
jis ko door se hi bjalay chera hoga
:k:
uff Ati rongtay kharay hogae :(
acha likha hai :(
. . .
azabe kabar sai sab ko guzarna ho ga
ab na koi jhoot na koi bahana hoo ga
sab tanha hon gey koi na apna ho ga . . .
apney kiye ka hisab sab ko dena ho ga . . .
phir...
sab royin gey . . .
chilain gey . . .
girgirayin gey . . .
par . . .
waqat guzar gia ho ga . . .
duniya sai ab tum ko na koi wasta ho ga
kai ab manzar tum par af sahan hoo ga
GHuthi uljahnnain sab sulajh jayin gee
ab sawalon ka jawab tum ko daina ho ga
nidamat sai sar jhuka ho ga
ankhon mai ab khauf ee khudha ho ga
Mujhay samajh nahi araha ke aap logoon ko pasand aye hai ke nahi 
Pharma : Un ke ser per haath phair ke behla phusla ke sula do dobara 
Annu : Thanx for liking & adding beautiful lines.
We are commanded to ask for the refuge of this happening to us after death let alone the thought of it. May Allah save all of us from this. aameen; for successful are those who strive for the mercy of Allah.
having said that, I must add that on the scale of poetry, it is some serious and good effort as far as the rythm and the diction goes.
Very Well done :k:
nice:k:
Re: Incomplete
sad:(