i'm torn

My dear used
Only three words
Like razor blades
To cut my mind
Into bleedy pices
Althought it hurts
I cry only at night
As ramzan shines
And Allahs blessings
Uplift my heart
With warm sun light

My dear put
Only three words
As a sharp dagger
Into my fair heart
it vanished all
I am cold now
But only at night
As ramzan warms
And Allahs blessings
Uplift my heart
With water taste in my mouth

dedicated to Numb…cause you are right

Re: i’m torn

:rotato:

painful

Re: i'm torn

only truth hurts...as that poem is plain truth it is....even more painfull

Re: i'm torn

Sad :(