IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ikk yad se mehka rehta hai
dil-e-bekaraan ka gulistaan
na chahte bhi dilshaad se hain
na itminaan na ashq rawaan
chaandani ki okk mai
ikk jahan sitaron ka
ajab ajab se roop hain
na shadmaan na ah-o-fighan
anokha sa dil ka haal hai
jo dil bhi khud na samajh saka
kabhi an chaha sa dard hai
kabhi uss dard ka darmaan
jurr gai kuch or yadain
uss yaad ki yaad se
kabhi anjana sa rog
kabhi sukoon kushaan kushaan…

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI…

Very Impressive Shaiz g :lajawab: but just iss okk key wazahat farma dain kay yah ook (goud) hay kah Owt

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI…

exactly…its lap but i don’t know how to write in roman :frowning:

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

JahaN tak meiN janta hooN, "ook" goad ko naheeN kehtay, "chulloo" ke mutradif hae, hath ki hatheli iss tarah phelaai hui k us meiN koi maya' cheez pani waghera Dala ja sakay.
Hawalay ke liay "pila de ook se saqi..." wala she'r talash kijiay... ghaliban yeh Ghalib ka she'r hae.

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

Aap ki nazm bohat achhi lagi, bohat si daad pesh kerta hooN.

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

u r right too that a gesture of dua called aok...bas mai thorra misunderstand ker gai thi...thanx 4 tellin.

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

thanx g.

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

While drinking water with our hands we made auk and that is called awk ...so its just a little clarification abt aouk and lap .....

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI…

mujhe nhi pata tha k aok itna controvircial word ban jaye ga…mai sab ki bat samajh gai…ab mujhe batain mai kis kuwain mai chalaang lagaon :aj:

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI…

aaj kal kunwain tou naheen hotay hain :konfused: nalay bhi Govt nay opar say band karnay shuru kar diye hain :hehe:
Actually i m still confused that either this word suite here not :konfuesd:

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI…

**Aap ki confusion drust hae, lekin Lafz ook yahaN drust hae sirff ye k “chaNdni” ki jagah “aasmaN”
aa jaay, kiyuNke sitaray chandni meiN aasman ki ook meiN heiN.
ber sabeel e tazkira Ghalib ka wo she’r bhi pesh ker deta hooN jo uss din mujhay yaad naheeN aa rha tha:

Pilaa de ook se saaqi jo ham se nafrat hae
peyala gar naheeN deta na de, sharaab to de**

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

shazia its really impresive

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

thanx Jia:)

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

thanx Faseeh for solving this problem...i'll take care of it next time.

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Re: IKK YAAD SE MEHKA REHTA HAI...

You are welcome!