ikk lams tha hathon main ab tak
wo lams chupaye baithe hain
ikk bheer main uss ko dekha tha
shayad wo phir se dikh jaye
ab lamhon,maheenon,saalon se
uss bheer main ja kar baithay hain
nah chlla,khat nah gulabi card
faqat ikk adhoori,uchat-ti si nigah
wo nigah bhi ab ma-doom hui
jissay aas banaye baithay hain
wo galian jin se guzray thay
wo galian to sunsaan huin
phir kiss se kahain keh hum to bas
do ghari se aye baithe hain
marne ka kab tha shoq hamain
bas ikk chah or rahat thi
iss qabar sarhane phoolon ki
chadar wo bichaye baithe hain…
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Umdah tehreer Shazia..:k:
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thanx Aryan,ye comments b ache hain bohat khoob k ilawa.
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kia bat he
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thanx t.n
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Shaiza G this is really marvelous poem and i must say you now you are improving day by day and this is one of your most matured poem .....
Keep it up ......
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thanku so much 4 apreciation Sannaan.
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very impressive poem shazia g ....
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sound nice .............
but shazia g .......... whats the purpose of this poem !!!!
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thanku so much g.l,v hapy 2 c u after long time.
sound nice .............
but shazia g .......... whats the purpose of this poem !!!!
thanx bt hven't get ur point sorry.
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bohat khoob lajawab Intikhab
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thanx sweet n sour & Sabeera.