Ik shair

IS · September 2, 2005, 6:54am

ana pay choot sehna dishwaar to hay magar
mai haar jata gar wo takraar karti tu –

Lovely_Me · September 2, 2005, 1:11pm

Re: Ik shair

nice one:)

Jaan_Lewaa · September 2, 2005, 6:35pm

Re: Ik shair

khoob:k:

Jhuki_Nigahein · September 2, 2005, 8:25pm

Re: Ik shair

*mai haar jata gar wo takraar karti tu --:( *

buhat acha shair hai

SunnyBoy · September 3, 2005, 3:08am

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:k:

IS · September 3, 2005, 4:59am

Re: Ik shair

Aap sab ka bohat bohat sukriya is shair ko pasand karnay ka

Golden_Scorpion_1 · September 4, 2005, 8:17am

Re: Ik shair

Very Nice :k:

IS · September 5, 2005, 5:48am

Re: Ik shair

^ Thanks

sana_0s0 · September 5, 2005, 6:25pm

Re: Ik shair

:k:

IS · September 6, 2005, 7:21am

Re: Ik shair

^ Thanks

Azad · September 9, 2005, 11:11pm

Re: Ik shair

hummm

IS · September 12, 2005, 8:31am

Re: Ik shair

^ :)
aap kaha gaieb hay aaj kal

fghd · September 12, 2005, 3:12pm

Re: Ik shair

array Munnay toun shayeeri bhi karta hai....wah wah khoob jamay gi gar mil baithay gein dou deewanay:D

nice sher yaar:)

Daanie · September 13, 2005, 5:53pm

Re: Ik shair

buhut khoob :)

IS · September 14, 2005, 5:51am

Re: Ik shair

tu apa kia aap b likhti hian phir tu ALLAH khair he karay poetry par

PS:- Thanks Apa

IS · September 14, 2005, 5:54am

Re: Ik shair

Thanks

Chittee_Billo · September 14, 2005, 6:48am

Re: Ik shair

Hi Innocent i like ur poetry, or diary main note bhi kar lie he

IS · September 14, 2005, 6:53am

Re: Ik shair

Oh
And thanks

Chittee_Billo · September 14, 2005, 7:14am

Re: Ik shair

Thanks is fine
but Oh?

IS · September 14, 2005, 7:25am

Re: Ik shair

Oh is lyiay k yea mera shiar nahi hay
agar mera hota tu mai poet 2 mai post karta :D