Milna to door ki baat tujhay yaad bhi na aooN gi
MaiN aisi jaooN gi kay phir lout kay na aooN gi
Rookna chaho to rook lo mujhay abhi waqat hay
Warna phir pachtaway ki agg tujhay jalay gi!!
By me of course…
Its vewwy good, but I made some changes to it, hopefully u wont mind that :)
Milna to door ki baat tujhay yaad bhi na aooN gi
MaiN 'itni dur' jaooN gi kay phir lout kay na aooN gi
Rookna chaho to rook lo mujhay abhi waqat hay
Warna phir pachtaway ki agg 'se tujhe mai na bachaongee'!!
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*Originally posted by pagaldeewani: *
Its vewwy good, but I made some changes to it, hopefully u wont mind that :)
Milna to door ki baat tujhay yaad bhi na aooN gi
MaiN 'itni dur' jaooN gi kay phir lout kay na aooN gi
Rookna chaho to rook lo mujhay abhi waqat hay
Warna phir pachtaway ki agg 'se tujhe mai na bachaongee'!!
[/QUOTE]
Great!
zabardest...:-)
Dono chelaiN gai...I mean shairs...;)
heheh, thanx for the clarification, my brain was about to head toward the wrong direction. 
Re: ik shair…
No black-mailing please 
PS:- Its wonderful 
Dewanee…
Capri…Thanks & who’s black-mailing …
The content of ur poetry is black-mailing type na 
Phir bhi hai beasar baat humari…
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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Phir bhi hai beasar baat humari....:)
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Bad-zauq hoga! Bhool jao usko :D
baat kahaN thi or kahaN pohanch gai
maiN apni bat kaar rahiN hooN…
Aap ne apne liye yeh shair kaha hai? 
capricorn bhai aap baree cheez ho hehehe, kasam se:D
Capri, nahiN meri ruh nai mera jisam kai liya:smack2: ruh is saying 2 me maiN perwaaz kaar jaooNgi Allah kai paas phir wapis na aooN gi…
lol Paglee…
Kaisee shairana rooh payee hai aap ne, wah… 
say, 
Kia kahne jee kia kahne…
Jitna piyar aapkee rooh aapke jism se kartee hai mujhe naheen lagta kabhee chor bhee jaye;)
Wondering if its the body or soul who is laughing! 
humm