Ik shair!

Swera · October 26, 2003, 7:57pm

Abhi tum ruko itni jaldi maat karo Ya fesala zindagi bhar ka tum ik paal maiN maat karo

Subha…

Nisaa · October 26, 2003, 10:59pm

Nice!!

Guest7777 · October 26, 2003, 11:02pm

Nice advice Swera :)

WiseGuy · October 27, 2003, 3:04am

Nice...

Azad · October 27, 2003, 5:45am

humm

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 27, 2003, 8:09am

nice shair :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 27, 2003, 11:38am

Re: Ik shair!

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*Originally posted by Swera: *

Abhi tum ruko itni jaldi maat karo
Ya fesala zindagi bhar ka tum ik paal maiN maat karo

Subha...:)
[/QUOTE]

Keep trying :-)
by the way '' Zindagii bhar ka'' kii bajaaey ''Umr bhar ka '' kyaa yeh munasib nahin hogaa? well i am not a poet you know better :-)

Swera · October 27, 2003, 1:42pm

Re: Re: Ik shair!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

Keep trying :-)
by the way '' Zindagii bhar ka'' kii bajaaey ''Umr bhar ka '' kyaa yeh munasib nahin hogaa? well i am not a poet you know better :-)
[/QUOTE]

Ji omer bhar, zindhagi bhar dono hi theak lagtay meray khiyal maiN....maiN bhi poet nahiN hooN:D baas youN hi likhti hooN..:)

MANAN · October 27, 2003, 3:41pm

good

Swera · October 27, 2003, 4:14pm

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*Originally posted by MANAN: *
good
[/QUOTE]

Ap nay to fesalah kaar liya na:P ap nay ab kiya sochna:D
BTW,
Thanks......

& Mannan Ramadan Mubarak...:)

system · October 29, 2003, 5:42am

very nice, thank you for sharing :)

Swera · October 29, 2003, 1:21pm

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Originally posted by *beautifulsong: *
very nice, thank you for sharing :)
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Thanks, u r welcome!