ik pal ko sakoot toot gaya dil ki qabar ka

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Shab-e-Hijar December 25, 2006, 7:57am 1

Aahat thi kisi khuaab ki ya dhoka tha nazar ka ik pal ko sakoot toot gaya dil ki qabar ka

aaNkhoN ka sehan bheeg gaya yaadoN ki nami sey
kuch bhi to sila nahi mila ashqoN pe jabar ka

jo lamha alvida ka tha O jaaney waaley meiN ney
tab sey hisaab chorr diya hey shaam-o-sehar ka

udaasiyoN ke gard meiN liptey huwey heiN log
wo maahol badal ke chala gaya saarey shehar ka

mosam kabhi giraaN tha to rastey kabhi katthan
har morr hum pe bhaari tha zindagi ke safar ka

har khaahish doob jaati hey samandar meiN yaas ke
shaed is leeye ke meiN musaafir hooN bhaNwar ka

beittheiN heiN is aas pe bhar jaey ga kabhi zakhm
ik waqt hi shaaed taryaaq hey yaadoN ke zehar ka

taqdeer ke haatoN meiN hey miqdaar phaloN ki
bahaar sey koi rabt nahi khuwahish ke shajar ka

By: Amal

High-Tech December 25, 2006, 6:43pm 2

Re: ik pal ko sakoot toot gaya dil ki qabar ka

nice…

kaway aur kankar ki kahani suni?. nai to parho zakhm bharna a jai ga

Shab-e-Hijar December 25, 2006, 11:01pm 3

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SunnyBoy December 26, 2006, 2:02am 4

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:k:

Paglee December 27, 2006, 4:17am 5

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nice one shabnum :p

IS December 28, 2006, 4:22am 6

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*Nice sharing :-) *

ghazal_kisi_ke December 28, 2006, 5:36am 7

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Shab-e-Hijar:

Aahat thi kisi khuaab ki ya dhoka tha nazar ka ik pal ko sakoot toot gaya dil ki qabar ka

aaNkhoN ka sehan bheeg gaya yaadoN ki nami sey kuch bhi to sila nahi mila ashqoN pe jabar ka

jo lamha alvida ka tha O jaaney waaley meiN ney tab sey hisaab chorr diya hey shaam-o-sehar ka

udaasiyoN ke gard meiN liptey huwey heiN log wo maahol badal ke chala gaya saarey shehar ka

mosam kabhi giraaN tha to rastey kabhi katthan har morr hum pe bhaari tha zindagi ke safar ka

har khaahish doob jaati hey samandar meiN yaas ke ** **shaed is leeye ke meiN musaafir hooN bhaNwar ka

beittheiN heiN is aas pe bhar jaey ga kabhi zakhm ik waqt hi shaaed taryaaq hey yaadoN ke zehar ka

taqdeer ke haatoN meiN hey miqdaar phaloN ki bahaar sey koi rabt nahi khuwahish ke shajar ka

By: Amal

beautiful :(

weather

GuL-e-Tasbeeh December 28, 2006, 3:19pm 8

Re: ik pal ko sakoot toot gaya dil ki qabar ka

Ahaa aapko bhi copy paste karna aa geya:p
Amazing stuff , thanku for sharing :-)

Capricorn December 28, 2006, 5:13pm 9

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Wah wah, kia zabardast shair kaha hai aap ne

Shab-e-Hijar December 29, 2006, 6:53am 10

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jo mane likha us par wah wah kya nahi

Shab-e-Hijar December 29, 2006, 6:53am 11

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LOL ahoo

HeArT_HaCKeR December 30, 2006, 4:25pm 12

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/3eautiful ... =)

Jhuki_Nigahein December 30, 2006, 9:49pm 13

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very nice :)

NikamiJano January 1, 2007, 5:28am 14

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nice one shab..kharboozay ko dekh k kharbooza rang b tu pakar jaya :p

EEMAAN January 1, 2007, 7:25pm 15

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Very nice..

Shab-e-Hijar January 1, 2007, 9:27pm 16

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Jano g kharbooza kis ko bola:konfused:

kaleemhk January 4, 2007, 2:46pm 17

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Bohat khoob..........:)

WiseGuy January 4, 2007, 3:07pm 18

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Kh00b thank you for sharing. :)