Paglee
June 29, 2003, 3:29am
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shamaa gazal ki laO buN jaieY aisa misRah ho tu kaho
ik ik haRaf maiN sooch ki khushboo dil ka ujala ho tu kaho
raaz-e-mohabat kahnaY walaY log tu laakhoon milteY haiN
raaz-e-mohabat rakhanY wala hum sa dekha ho tu kaho
kon gawahi day gha uth k jhootooN ki is basti maiN
such ki keemat day saknay ka tum maiN yaRa ho tu kaho
wesay tu haR shakas k dil maiN aik kahani hoti hai
hijaR ka lawa gham ka saleeqa daRd ka lahja ho tu kaho
amjad sahib ap ne be tu dunia ghoom k dekhi hai
asi ankhaiN haiN tu batao aisa chehRa ho tu kaho*
larki aur poem dono achi hain. kise ke tareef karoon ;)
Paglee
June 29, 2003, 3:35am
3
larki poem ko choro Paglee ki karo
ap teeno(3) ik say bhar kar ik hain
1: poem
2 pem main jo larki hai
3: AP
Paglee
June 29, 2003, 12:17pm
9
thanks chando g bt ap hoti kahn hia aj kal ph be bz bz
Amal
June 29, 2003, 12:28pm
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Re: ik ik haRaf maiN sooch ki khushboo dil ka ujala ho tu kaho
*Originally posted by Paglee: *
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raaz-e-mohabat kahnaY walaY log tu laakhoon milteY haiN
raaz-e-mohabat rakhanY wala hum sa dekha ho tu kaho
kon gawahi day gha uth k jhootooN ki is basti maiN
such ki keemat day saknay ka tum maiN yaRa ho tu kaho
wesay tu haR shakas k dil maiN aik kahani hoti hai
hijaR ka lawa gham ka saleeqa daRd ka lahja ho tu kaho
amjad sahib ap ne be tu dunia ghoom k dekhi hai
asi ankhaiN haiN tu batao aisa chehRa ho tu kaho*
Lovely ghazal Paglee :k:…thanx for sharing with us:)
wowowow paglee jee akher merei sath reh kei ur choice bhe mere terha ache ho gei hei:p
ap kider hoteen msn pei anei pe pabande to nehen mei nei lagae:crying:
Paglee
July 1, 2003, 2:08am
16
Re: Re: ik ik haRaf maiN sooch ki khushboo dil ka ujala ho tu kaho