ik haraf ki kirchi kahiN seenay main chubhi thei

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal December 4, 2007, 12:00am 1

ik dil maiN tha ik saa’mnay dar’yaa usay kahNa
mumkiN tha kahaN paa’r utarna usay kahNa

hijraa’N k samandar maiN hay’Ola tha kisi ka
amkaa’N k bhanwar se koi ubhra usay kahNa

ik haraf ki kirchi kahiN seenay main chubhi thei
pahroon tha koi toot k roo’ya usay kahNa

jaati thei koi raa’h akeli kisi jaa’nib
tanha tha safar maiN koi saa’ya usay kahNa

har zakham dharkaN maiN ki sadaa ghoonj rehi thei
ik hashar ka tha shor sharaba usay kahNa

Shab-e-Hijar December 4, 2007, 12:03am 2

Re: ik haraf ki kirchi kahiN seenay main chubhi thei

bohaaaat khooob :k:

Dushwari December 4, 2007, 12:41am 3

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bohet achee nazm heye, koyal. best,
Dushwari

EEMAAN December 4, 2007, 1:23am 4

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Wowwww,,,bohat zabardast..

Khawab jala raha hn..

Aryaan December 4, 2007, 2:06am 5

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Bohat hi khoob Koyal..:k:

Azad December 4, 2007, 3:03am 6

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acha intekhaab :k:

Prince_Ali December 4, 2007, 5:19am 7

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very nice

Ali_2 December 4, 2007, 6:22am 8

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beautiful sharing :k:

redidentity December 4, 2007, 6:44am 9

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beautiful.. :)

SJ December 4, 2007, 7:37am 10

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Awesome Dear

Koyal December 4, 2007, 2:20pm 11

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thanks SJ

Azad December 4, 2007, 2:37pm 12

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hummm koyal door ki nazar kam hay kia?

Koyal December 4, 2007, 2:39pm 13

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keoN typing maiN wrong hai kia..wesay ap tu nazar a rahya haiN

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Jhanjharewali December 5, 2007, 2:27am 14

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Koyal…its superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

K_Khan December 5, 2007, 4:16am 15

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good one koko... :)

Sheal December 5, 2007, 11:49am 16

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nice post koyal :k:

Koyal December 6, 2007, 2:25am 17

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tha nks

Koyal December 6, 2007, 2:26am 18

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thanks sheal g

Koyal December 6, 2007, 2:27am 19

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thanks