ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

[Starlight]

Ye jo dil main pheli hain khawishen,bari chah se,baray chaao say
Hain nadi kinaare ki bastiyan jo na bach saken gi kataao say

Nazer aane waale jo zakham the,chalo wo to waqt ne bhar diye
Mager un ka kaise ilaj ho jo lage hain rooh main ghaao say

Meri zindagi main jab aayi hai ye shadeed rut to kahan gaye
Wo jo germioun main the chaaon se,the jo sardioun main alaao say

Mujhe ki gayi hai ye peshkash kay saza main hon gi riayten
Jo qasoor main ne kiya nahi,wo qabool ker lon dabaao say

Ye jo itni tund hawaon main kiya nasb khema-e-aarzoo
Kahin ye na ho k tanab-e-jaan teri toot jaaye tanaao say

Meri zindgi ki jo naao hai wo samanderon kay safar main hai
Kabhi naao uljhi hai moj say ,kabhi moj uljhi hai naao say

[glamorous]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

^_^

[bholibisri]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

Meri zindgi ki jo naao hai wo samanderon kay safar main hai
Kabhi naao uljhi hai moj say ,kabhi moj uljhi hai naao say

star ye tum ne khud likhi hia :D<!-- / message -->

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

Nice :k:

[Aryaan]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

Bohat khoob Starlight...

[redidentity]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

buhat khoob..

[being_lonely]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

mere dil phaink shehzaaday kuch dil ruba si ghazal nazar karni thi na :p

[Capricorn]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

Mujhe ki gayi hai ye peshkash kay saza main hon gi riayten Jo qasoor main ne kiya nahi,wo qabool ker lon dabaao say

Beautiful......aisa hee kuch ho raha hai aas paas, mulk-e-Pakistan mein :-)

[arsalanh2000]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

Buhut Khoob, :desimunda:

[muncho]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

Meri zindagi main jab aayi hai ye shadeed rut to kahan gaye
Wo jo germioun main the chaaon se,the jo sardioun main alaao say

reminds me ''ghar wapis jub aaoo gaay tum, kon kahay ga, tum bin...'' and all those caring beloveds who left us all alone to face the hardships of life.:(
bahut aala sharing

[Starlight]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

pasandeedgi ka shukria.

[sunny_nicky]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

hmm nicee

[NikamiJano]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

nice 1 star :)

[ASA]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

bouhat khoob

[hiba_no.1]

Re: ik ghazal ap sub ki nazar

nice