ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay'aanat kabhi na ki

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 4:02am

hum ne tu kheR tuj se shika’yat kabhi na ki
aisa nahi k dil ne baghaa’wat kabhi na ki

mahsoos kia kaRay gha wo au’RoN k daRd ko
jis ne khud apnay ap se ul’fat kabhi na ki

phiR faislaY ka haa’q isaY hasil hai kis taRha
roo’daad-e-gham ki jis ne sama’yaat kbhi na ki

haaR daastaaN teRi bohat ghooR se suni
lakiN bay’aaN apni hekaa’yat kabhi na ki

ik khawab tha jo apni shabooN peR raha muheet
kia khawab tha? kisi se wazahat kabhi na ki

ik aag thei k jalteY rahay jis maiN umeR bhaR
ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay’aanat kabhi na ki

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · April 16, 2003, 5:44am

nice

Awaz20 · April 16, 2003, 5:44am

hmmmm

good jee :) nice one ap ka nick bahut acha laga mujhey .....hehehehe :P

Azad · April 16, 2003, 9:36am

chalain baqi cheezon main to khaynat kar kay tabeeyat sayr ho gaii hay na

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 16, 2003, 9:41am

Re: ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay’aanat kabhi na ki

mei nei bih kebhe nehe kee

Dilsay · April 16, 2003, 9:46am

Re: ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay'aanat kabhi na ki

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Paglee: *

hum ne tu kheR tuj se shika'yat kabhi na ki
aisa nahi k dil ne baghaa'wat kabhi na ki

mahsoos kia kaRay gha wo au'RoN k daRd ko
jis ne khud apnay ap se ul'fat kabhi na ki
**
phiR faislaY ka haa'q isaY hasil hai kis taRha
roo'daad-e-gham ki jis ne sama'yaat kbhi na ki **

haaR daastaaN teRi bohat ghooR se suni
lakiN bay'aaN apni hekaa'yat kabhi na ki

ik khawab tha jo apni shabooN peR raha muheet
kia khawab tha? kisi se wazahat kabhi na ki

ik aag thei k jalteY rahay jis maiN umeR bhaR
ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay'aanat kabhi na ki
[/QUOTE]

Great simply beautiful... thanks for sharing....

bhatka_musafir · April 16, 2003, 10:17am

mahsoos kia kaRay gha wo au'RoN k daRd ko
jis ne khud apnay ap se ul'fat kabhi na ki

very nice.

listener-leo · April 16, 2003, 1:28pm

umda…, wasay kia khayant k bajiay amant kisi or k supard kardain, its also for u muskaan

nikii · April 16, 2003, 1:35pm

bhut khoob pagleee :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 16, 2003, 1:40pm

ziada na hansein
mei toh apnei homework ke bat ker rei thee:hehe:

Amal · April 16, 2003, 2:03pm

Re: ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay’aanat kabhi na ki

Bohat khoob Paglee:k:…thanx for sharing.

ayman · April 16, 2003, 2:13pm

wah bohot khoob :k:

WiseGuy · April 16, 2003, 3:32pm

Zabardast Paglee, kia baat hai :)

Lamhay · April 16, 2003, 4:09pm

bahut khoob !

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 8:44pm

:nono: and thanks BiB…

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 8:48pm

Re: hmmmm

shukria g..and welcome here g aur nick pasand karnay ka

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 8:51pm

thanks azad.. bhatkay huwey....ayman..lamhay sis..niki sis..ayman
:)..and dil sey..:)

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 8:52pm

hmmmm kis k …koi hia yahan amanatain smabhlnay wala
any way thanks and welcome..

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 8:55pm

Re: Re: ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay’aanat kabhi na ki

kia? jo kabhi nehi kii..

Paglee · April 16, 2003, 8:56pm

Re: Re: ik daRd tha k jis maiN khay’aanat kabhi na ki

thanks for comin..