Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Ali_2 November 18, 2007, 3:50pm 1

               Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Meray Sath Saath Safar Mein Tha Meri ManzilOn Say Zara Paray

Teri jUstjOo Kay HiSaar Say Teray Khwaab Teray Khyaal Say
Main wO Shakhs Tha jO Khara Raha Teri ChahatOn Say Zara Paray

Kabhi Dil Ki Baat Kahi Na Thii jO Kahii tO wO Bhi Dabi Dabi
Meray Lafz POoray tO Thay Magar Thay Sama’atOn Say Zara Paray

tOo Chala Gya Meray hUmSafar Zara mUrr Kay Dekh tO Ik Nazar
Meri KaShtiyaan hAin jAllii hOien Teray SahilOn Say Zara Paray

babri November 18, 2007, 4:00pm 2

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

tOo Chala Gya Meray hUmSafar Zara mUrr Kay Dekh tO Ik Nazar
Meri KaShtiyaan hAin jAllii hOien Teray SahilOn Say Zara Paray

bohat khoob.

bheegiyaad November 18, 2007, 4:34pm 3

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Teri jUstjOo Kay HiSaar Say Teray Khwaab Teray Khyaal Say
Main wO Shakhs Tha jO Khara Raha Teri ChahatOn Say Zara Paray

:k:

babri November 18, 2007, 5:07pm 4

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Ali:

               Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray
Meray Sath Saath Safar Mein Tha Meri ManzilOn Say Zara Paray

Teri jUstjOo Kay HiSaar Say Teray Khwaab Teray Khyaal Say Main wO Shakhs Tha jO Khara Raha Teri ChahatOn Say Zara Paray

Kabhi Dil Ki Baat Kahi Na Thii jO Kahii tO wO Bhi Dabi Dabi Meray Lafz POoray tO Thay Magar Thay Sama’atOn Say Zara Paray

tOo Chala Gya Meray hUmSafar Zara mUrr Kay Dekh tO Ik Nazar Meri KaShtiyaan hAin jAllii hOien Teray SahilOn Say Zara Paray

KITNEY ZULFEIN KHILEIN KITNAYANCHAL URAY CHAND KO KIA KHBAR
KITNA MATAM HUA KITNEY ANSOO BAHAY CHAND KO KIA KHBAR

MUDATOON USS KI KHWAHISH MEIN SATH CHALTAY RAHAY HAATH ATA NAHI CHAH MEIN US KE PAIROON MEIN HEIN ABLAY CHAND KO KIA KHABAR

Shab-e-Hijar November 18, 2007, 6:25pm 5

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Beautiful

bholibisri November 18, 2007, 7:26pm 6

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

bohat achi sharin hai Ali_ :)

NikamiJano November 18, 2007, 7:38pm 7

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Teri jUstjOo Kay HiSaar Say Teray Khwaab Teray Khyaal Say
Main wO Shakhs Tha jO Khara Raha Teri ChahatOn Say Zara Paray

Beautiful sharin :)

sunny_nicky November 18, 2007, 8:02pm 8

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Teri jUstjOo Kay HiSaar Say Teray Khwaab Teray Khyaal Say
Main wO Shakhs Tha jO Khara Raha Teri ChahatOn Say Zara Paray

buhat khoob aliii

Sheal November 18, 2007, 8:49pm 9

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

bohot khoob :k:

btw who is the poet…? bohot jani pehchani tehreer lagti hai…

Ali_2 November 19, 2007, 4:30am 10

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Thanks all

dont know the poet name

Aryaan November 19, 2007, 4:37am 11

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Jis ne bhi likha hai, khoob likha hai..:k:
Thanks 4 sharing Ali..

Fun new names for forums

redidentity November 19, 2007, 5:16am 12

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

beautiful..

Daanie November 19, 2007, 6:40am 13

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buhut khoob :)

tum_bin_1 November 19, 2007, 9:19am 14

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Kabhi Dil Ki Baat Kahi Na Thii jO Kahii tO wO Bhi Dabi Dabi
Meray Lafz POoray tO Thay Magar Thay Sama’atOn Say Zara Paray

i just love this Ghazal …
:k:

Ali_2 November 19, 2007, 9:42am 15

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

yep its amazing piece of poetry

Thanks All

Are they really scanning G.S?

arsalanh2000 November 20, 2007, 11:01am 16

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Kabhi Dil Ki Baat Kahi Na Thii jO Kahii tO wO Bhi Dabi Dabi
Meray Lafz POoray tO Thay Magar Thay Sama’atOn Say Zara Paray

Wah ji buhut khoob

fara January 6, 2008, 9:53am 17

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Excellent ghazal... Who is the poet?

Ali_2 January 6, 2008, 10:07am 18

Re: Ik Chand tAnhA Khila Rha Meray Aasmaan Say Zara Paray

Thanks for appreciation :)

Don't know the poet name :(