Ik baar kaho tum mere ho:blush:
tum dusri larkiyon ko kyun chairay ho
bus tum sirf mere he ho
tumharay baghair meri koi kal na ho
is dil mein thori si hulchul ho
tum meri aankhon ka kajal ho
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hehe
nice onee
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what's so funny then
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btw yeahan end kyun kardi it can go on , like
Tum kissi mendaaak ki kaaal hoooo
mayray saar kay kaalay baaal hooo
mayreee moooti sssi naaak hooo
mayray chootay saay kaaan hooo
or larkiyaan jo chahay kaha.aainn
tum mayray bahi jaan hooo !
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kya baat hai aliyish .........app nay too gazal main jaan daal de........................
its so funny........
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oh yeah. kiya pehlay wo sense nahi bana rahi thi
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Don’t be discouraged by those who make fun of your poetry.
Your poetry is refreshing and original. Keep writing. Perhaps you
come up with amazing lines when you try to rhyme. Nevertheless,
it’s wonderful and you are very creative. Your last line seems to be
falling out of the blue, and is very endearing.
Tell me once you are mine
Tell me once why you chase girls
There will be no tomorrow without you
And my heart will be queasy without you
The kohl of my eyes is within you…