Ik Baar Agar Tum Keh Jataay !

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

tum_bin_1 September 17, 2007, 4:47pm 1

Saawan ki ghataa ghangor sahi
Hoti hai hava purzor sahi
Saahil chokhat per reh jaatay
Khaamosh leher bann beh jaatay
Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay

Jeevan ki kathaa mushkil mushkil
Saadaa lafzo’n mai’n keh jaatay
Tum keh daitay ik baar agar
Bann ker afsaanaa reh jaatay
Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay

Tum saath jo chaltay chaar qadam
Taqdeer tumhaari bann jaatay
Hum jeevan ki is dorr mai’n bhi
Dunyaa se peechhay reh jaatay
Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay

Garr aankh tumhaari namm hoti
Maskan apna aisaa kartay
Hum aankh ka kaajal ho jaatay
Bheegi palko’n se beh jaatay
Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay

Khaamosh kharay taktay tum ko
khaamosh zabaa’n se tum kehtay
Wo baat jo tum aksar Sajid
Kehtay Kehtay thay reh jaatay
Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay!

Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay!

Prince_Ali September 17, 2007, 4:49pm 2

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wah tum_bin ji! kya baat hai, something with a difference
kamal kar diya

Sheal September 17, 2007, 4:50pm 3

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bohoot khoob :k: thanks for sharing it tum bin.

tum_bin_1 September 17, 2007, 5:04pm 4

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Thanks

tum_bin_1 September 17, 2007, 5:04pm 5

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Thanks alot

Sheal September 17, 2007, 5:10pm 6

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u r welcome

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

being_lonely September 17, 2007, 5:18pm 7

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Lambi nazam hai meri dosht mei ne nahi parhni mei naraz hoon

tum_bin_1 September 17, 2007, 5:22pm 8

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kyun naraz hain aap ?

being_lonely September 17, 2007, 5:35pm 9

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bas anwein naraz hon koi tha he jis se naraz hota so aap se ho gaya !

tum_bin_1 September 17, 2007, 5:40pm 10

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aap hotay kahan hain …nazar he nahi aatay ???

SJ September 19, 2007, 2:58pm 11

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bohat Khobsorat nazam...............
Tum saath jo chaltay chaar qadam
Taqdeer tumhaari bann jaatay
Hum jeevan ki is dorr mai'n bhi
Dunyaa se peechhay reh jaatay
Ik baar agar tum keh jaatay

being_lonely September 19, 2007, 3:15pm 12

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ab hum hain to aap nahi hian !

SJ September 19, 2007, 3:26pm 13

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kon?????????
tum_bin????????
uss ka paper hai na:)

Samad September 19, 2007, 3:27pm 14

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I think I read this in "Family" weekly magazine.

SJ September 19, 2007, 3:30pm 15

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ho sakta hai .....
kyun k ye kisi naamwar shair ki takhleek hai janab

tum_bin_1 September 20, 2007, 8:49am 16

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aap magazines parhtay hain ya yaad kertay hain :pcg:

Nikka_Kaka September 20, 2007, 8:56am 17

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very nice thx for sharing

Pakistan snubs David Cameron

LeoTiger September 22, 2007, 10:16pm 18

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excellent...tum_bin

tum_bin_1 September 23, 2007, 6:00pm 19

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Thanks :)

sunny_nicky September 23, 2007, 6:04pm 20

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nicee :)