Re: Ibn e Insha - An incomplete poem
nice poem, indeed!
do nikaat kii taraf aapkii tavajjoh mabzool karaanaa chaahuuNgaa agar baar e Khaatir na guzre to: awwalan to yeh k yeh mujhe ek musalsal Ghazal lagtii hai kiuN k nazm kaa koii title aapne nahiiN diyaa…agar nazam hotii to iskaa koii title hotaa…chuN k Ghazal kaa koii title nahiiN hotaa is liye is kalaam ke ek "musalsal Ghazal’ honaa kaa qiyaas maGhloob hai…aap nazar e saanii farma alijiiyegaa:
doyam yeh k aap ne ba_taur radeef “logoN” likhaa hai jisse qaare’iin ko “LOG kaa seGha-e-jam’a LOGON” kaa gumaaN guzartaa hai [yeh ho saktaa hai roman Urdu kaa qusoor ho!] dar asl yeh lafz-e-taKhaatub hai ya’nii 'LOGO" [o people!] 