i had to write a love poem 4 my eng class, so wucja think??..
“Oh My Love”
Oh my love, thanks for your heart,
I’ll keep it forever and we’ll never fall apart.
Oh my love, as you can see,
I can’t live without knowing that you love me.
Oh my love, if you don’t know how,
To prove your love, just a kiss is enough for me now.
Oh my love, hold me close,
Watch life will seem easier as it goes.
Oh my love, just look in my eyes,
And see the love, for you, that lies.
Oh my love, don’t forget this is true,
No matter what, I’ll always love you!
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Ums
2
Gr8.
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very nice .. keep it up
in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim
heyy same here, xcept thiz 1, i had to make myself sit n write it 4 my eng class, im not that good ne wayz!! ok c ya!
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WOWW zabar10 keep it up!!!
~yeh noor ke sholay uthtay hain, mera hee dil garmanay ko
jo bijli ufak main chamki hai, chamki hai mere taRpanay ko~
Apnay akailay pan ka main kis say gila karoon
Jis ko bhi murh kay daikha woh tanhayOon maiN hay~
Maywish you are wonderful in rhyming. Keep this up
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Thanx everyone, gladd u like it!!
Thanx everyone, gladd u like it!!
… nice one … you are definitely not an amateur
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Make yourself a better person and know who you are before you try and know someone else and expect them to know you…
THANX
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…but really i m an amateur, all my poemz rhyme, they rn’t that good, but i felt like sharin, so thanx everyone!!!
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wonderful
AiNt NoThIn' BuT A HeArT AcHe..
AiNt NoThIn' BuT A DiStAnCe
Dania
15
nice
If you love someone, put their name in a circle, instead of a heart, because hearts can break, but circles go on forever!! *
*~Gracias Adiós~**
thanx everyone…
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There’s a light at the end of every tunnel… just pray it’s not a train.
No man is worth your tears and the only one who is will never make you cry.