I Want To Tell You.

Swera · April 2, 2003, 3:45am

I WANT TO TELL YOU.

I just want to tell you,
You don’t keep your promises,
You hurt me, too.
You make me cry.
You get mad at me for no reason.
You sometimes don’t even truest me!
But, there’s a bright side of you, too…
You don’t let me down,
Even when things go wrong.
Times are hard.
You make me happy,
When I’m feeling sad.
You tell me I “MEAN” to you!
You show me the light,
When I feel the dark surrounding me,
You thought me too look at the bright side.
That’s what makes you, “YOU”.
And I love that, “YOU”!

By Subha

Man_de_Mouj · April 2, 2003, 4:21am

Re: I Want To Tell You.

Relatively a fair attempt...keep writing

Azad · April 2, 2003, 6:11am

WiseGuy · April 2, 2003, 2:01pm

Re: I Want To Tell You.

Thats so nice of you, thats for understanding, and yea keep looking at the bright side

WiseGuy · April 2, 2003, 2:02pm

I mean thanks for understanding*

ameen · April 2, 2003, 6:47pm

sahe fermaya aap nay. nice one. keep writing.

Philanthrope · April 2, 2003, 6:56pm

Nice try… Keep it up :k:

Swera · April 3, 2003, 3:21am

Thankyou :) all of u.

Azad sahib ap ka Allah hi hafiz, thori s englsih seek lan :p ;)

Dilsay · April 3, 2003, 5:34am

Very nice and near to reality....

Azad · April 3, 2003, 6:27am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Thankyou :) all of u.

Azad sahib ap ka Allah hi hafiz, thori s englsih seek lan :p ;)
[/QUOTE]

Humain English rass nahi aati ;)

Swera · April 3, 2003, 6:33am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

Humain English rass nahi aati ;)
[/QUOTE]

Isi liyai AZAD hain ap :p

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 3:02pm

Swera · April 4, 2003, 3:20am

Re: Re: I Want To Tell You.

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Thats so nice of you, thats for understanding, and yea keep looking at the bright side :)
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:)

Swera · April 4, 2003, 3:23am

ap kis baat sai onfused hain?
Meri oper wlai reply sai?

Bhi, AZAD hian isi liyai jo dill main keh diya …