i want poem

[ullujii]

kanch ki guriya

[Koyal]

wo toot gaye hia :(

[ullujii]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *
wo toot gaye hia :(
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ap nay qu toori :(

[Koyal]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ullujii: *

ap nay qu toori :(
[/QUOTE]

tootnay wali cheez thei kisi k hatoon toot gaye :(

[ullujii]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

tootnay wali cheez thei kisi k hatoon toot gaye :(
[/QUOTE]

ap nay care nahin kee na is lieya toot gye :(

[Koyal]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ullujii: *

ap nay care nahin kee na is lieya toot gye :(
[/QUOTE]

guria khud apni care kesay karti..ye tu torany waloon ko ahsas hona cahiey tha k handle with care k sath :(

[ullujii]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

guria khud apni care kesay karti..ye tu torany waloon ko ahsas hona cahiey tha k handle with care k sath :(
[/QUOTE]

kasoor guria ka be hai :( sara kasoro kabi ik person ka nahin hota :(

[Koyal]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ullujii: *

kasoor guria ka be hai :( sara kasoro kabi ik person ka nahin hota :(
[/QUOTE]

guria tu bechari bejaan us ka kesay qasoor hota wo tu kaanch ki behis guria :(

[ullujii]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

guria tu bechari bejaan us ka kesay qasoor hota wo tu kaanch ki behis guria :(
[/QUOTE]

humri wali bayjaan nahin the :(

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Sheeshay ki Guria

Mae kia bataoun tumhein k wo kia thee
Bus sheeshay ki ik guria thee
Phir kaise wo bikhar gayee
Ye aik taveel kahani hai
Jo us ki apni zubani hai
Aik raat suhani aayee thee
Pariyoon ki baraat liye
Khushiyoon k lamhaat liye
Aur us ko apne saath liye
Wo aik roop nagr ka shahzada tha
Mae apne mun ki rani thee
Phir rahoon mein mulaQat hoee
Aur us se mun ki baat hoee
Yun chahat ki barsaat hoee
Phir mere chaman ka hur guncha
Aik nayee shaQal mein khil utha
Jub khushbu ki mehkaar hoee
Tu saray mosum must hoay
Ab mera mun bhee shaad howa
Aik sapna hur aik raat hwa
Yun sapnon ki baraat hoee
Aur sawan ki barsaat hoee
Per khwaab kahan such hota hai
Ye neendon mein ik dhoka hai
Ab saray mosum beet gay
Aur mere mun ki hur hulchal
Du pal mein youn veeran hoee
Bus sheeshay ki mae tu guria thee
Aik thees se toot ker bikhar gayee
Jo Qadr na janay hum guriyoon ko
Wo gahuk hamein kion le jatay hain
Na Qaid karo hum guriyon ko
Hum itna kehna chahtay hain
Hum dil k rehne wale hain
Hum dil mein achay lagte hain
Per Qadr kissi shehkerr ki
be-dard zamana kia janay ...:(

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

OMG OMG OMG

ap ne kanch ki guria mangi aur mae ne sheeshay ki guria likh deeeee

here it is

Kanch Ki Guria

*

Mae aik kaanch ki Guria
Haway-e-duhr ki zid mein
Kabhi tooti kabhi bikhri
Mae waQt ki ankh mein tehra howa
Be-rung sa Aanssoo
K jis ki manzelein zameen ki pehnaiyaan tehri
Mae angun k dur-o-deevar per tehra
Aik khazan-zada mosum
Jisse koi dekhna chahay na khwaish ho choonay ki
Mae aik kanch ki guria
Mae be-rung sa Aansoo
Mae khazan-zada mosum
Mgr ruko, suno, dekho
Mae Insaan bhee tu hoon
Mere ehsaas k zakhmi badn ko narum lafzoon ka marhum du
Mere be-rung hathoon ko kabhi tu koi rung de du
Mohabbat na sahi
Mgr itna hee ker du tum
FaQt aetbaar ka ik la-zawal pal mujhe de du … *

[ullujii]

*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
OMG OMG OMG

ap ne kanch ki guria mangi aur mae ne sheeshay ki guria likh deeeee

here it is

Kanch Ki Guria

*

Mae aik kaanch ki Guria
Haway-e-duhr ki zid mein
Kabhi tooti kabhi bikhri
Mae waQt ki ankh mein tehra howa
Be-rung sa Aanssoo
K jis ki manzelein zameen ki pehnaiyaan tehri
Mae angun k dur-o-deevar per tehra
Aik khazan-zada mosum
Jisse koi dekhna chahay na khwaish ho choonay ki
Mae aik kanch ki guria
Mae be-rung sa Aansoo
Mae khazan-zada mosum
Mgr ruko, suno, dekho
Mae Insaan bhee tu hoon
Mere ehsaas k zakhmi badn ko narum lafzoon ka marhum du
Mere be-rung hathoon ko kabhi tu koi rung de du
Mohabbat na sahi
Mgr itna hee ker du tum
FaQt aetbaar ka ik la-zawal pal mujhe de du … *

oh thank you HH

[ullujii]

*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
Sheeshay ki Guria

Mae kia bataoun tumhein k wo kia thee
Bus sheeshay ki ik guria thee
Phir kaise wo bikhar gayee
Ye aik taveel kahani hai
Jo us ki apni zubani hai
Aik raat suhani aayee thee
Pariyoon ki baraat liye
Khushiyoon k lamhaat liye
Aur us ko apne saath liye
Wo aik roop nagr ka shahzada tha
Mae apne mun ki rani thee
Phir rahoon mein mulaQat hoee
Aur us se mun ki baat hoee
Yun chahat ki barsaat hoee
Phir mere chaman ka hur guncha
Aik nayee shaQal mein khil utha
Jub khushbu ki mehkaar hoee
Tu saray mosum must hoay
Ab mera mun bhee shaad howa
Aik sapna hur aik raat hwa
Yun sapnon ki baraat hoee
Aur sawan ki barsaat hoee
Per khwaab kahan such hota hai
Ye neendon mein ik dhoka hai
Ab saray mosum beet gay
Aur mere mun ki hur hulchal
Du pal mein youn veeran hoee
Bus sheeshay ki mae tu guria thee
Aik thees se toot ker bikhar gayee
Jo Qadr na janay hum guriyoon ko
Wo gahuk hamein kion le jatay hain
Na Qaid karo hum guriyon ko
Hum itna kehna chahtay hain
Hum dil k rehne wale hain
Hum dil mein achay lagte hain
Per Qadr kissi shehkerr ki
be-dard zamana kia janay …

woww wonderfull HH :k:

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

*Originally posted by ullujii: *

woww wonderfull HH :k:

thankssssssssss

[NikamiJano]

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
**Sheeshay ki Guria*

Mae kia bataoun tumhein k wo kia thee
Bus sheeshay ki ik guria thee
Phir kaise wo bikhar gayee
Ye aik taveel kahani hai
Jo us ki apni zubani hai
Aik raat suhani aayee thee
Pariyoon ki baraat liye
Khushiyoon k lamhaat liye
Aur us ko apne saath liye
Wo aik roop nagr ka shahzada tha
Mae apne mun ki rani thee
Phir rahoon mein mulaQat hoee
Aur us se mun ki baat hoee
Yun chahat ki barsaat hoee
Phir mere chaman ka hur guncha
Aik nayee shaQal mein khil utha
Jub khushbu ki mehkaar hoee
Tu saray mosum must hoay
Ab mera mun bhee shaad howa
Aik sapna hur aik raat hwa
Yun sapnon ki baraat hoee
Aur sawan ki barsaat hoee
Per khwaab kahan such hota hai
Ye neendon mein ik dhoka hai
Ab saray mosum beet gay
Aur mere mun ki hur hulchal
Du pal mein youn veeran hoee
Bus sheeshay ki mae tu guria thee
Aik thees se toot ker bikhar gayee
Jo Qadr na janay hum guriyoon ko
Wo gahuk hamein kion le jatay hain
Na Qaid karo hum guriyon ko
Hum itna kehna chahtay hain
Hum dil k rehne wale hain
Hum dil mein achay lagte hain
Per Qadr kissi shehkerr ki
be-dard zamana kia janay ...:(
[/QUOTE]

bohat khubsurat nazam :)

[NikamiJano]

*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
OMG OMG OMG

ap ne kanch ki guria mangi aur mae ne sheeshay ki guria likh deeeee

here it is

Kanch Ki Guria

*

Mae aik kaanch ki Guria
Haway-e-duhr ki zid mein
Kabhi tooti kabhi bikhri
Mae waQt ki ankh mein tehra howa
Be-rung sa Aanssoo
K jis ki manzelein zameen ki pehnaiyaan tehri
Mae angun k dur-o-deevar per tehra
Aik khazan-zada mosum
Jisse koi dekhna chahay na khwaish ho choonay ki
Mae aik kanch ki guria
Mae be-rung sa Aansoo
Mae khazan-zada mosum
Mgr ruko, suno, dekho
Mae Insaan bhee tu hoon
Mere ehsaas k zakhmi badn ko narum lafzoon ka marhum du
Mere be-rung hathoon ko kabhi tu koi rung de du
Mohabbat na sahi
Mgr itna hee ker du tum
FaQt aetbaar ka ik la-zawal pal mujhe de du … *

:k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

HH dono nazams bohut khoobsorat hain:k:

[_TaNhAyAaN]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *

Kanch Ki Guria

*

Mae aik kaanch ki Guria
Haway-e-duhr ki zid mein
Kabhi tooti kabhi bikhri
Mae waQt ki ankh mein tehra howa
Be-rung sa Aanssoo
K jis ki manzelein zameen ki pehnaiyaan tehri
Mae angun k dur-o-deevar per tehra
Aik khazan-zada mosum
Jisse koi dekhna chahay na khwaish ho choonay ki
Mae aik kanch ki guria
Mae be-rung sa Aansoo
Mae khazan-zada mosum
Mgr ruko, suno, dekho
Mae Insaan bhee tu hoon
Mere ehsaas k zakhmi badn ko narum lafzoon ka marhum du
Mere be-rung hathoon ko kabhi tu koi rung de du
Mohabbat na sahi
Mgr itna hee ker du tum
*FaQt aetbaar ka ik la-zawal pal mujhe de du ... **
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:-/ it's one of the most sad poems I have ever heard.. :(

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

^^ **Nikami, GKK , Tanhayaan **ap sub ka pasand kerne ka bohat bohat shukriya

[chodhry]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ullujii: *

kasoor guria ka be hai :( sara kasoro kabi ik person ka nahin hota :(
[/QUOTE]

hmmm, mamla serious lagta hay

P.S. Kasoor, Kasoor mein rehney waloon ka hey.