I proclaim

fazeelat · February 5, 2006, 4:15pm

salamz, this poem is actually by my fiance

i proclaim
One beat to sound the melody of love
One heart to cry its mystic flame
One soul to plead for other- true love
One sigh to tell thy heart has changed
One tear to tell if love is true

One thought to make her think again

One word to speak the message sealed
One kiss to show my love- unchanged
One drop of blood to color the rose
One step away stood- heart complains
One voice to sense the heart again
One love to live with- I proclaim

darwesh · February 5, 2006, 5:09pm

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Fazeelat Saheba...
Apke Husn e Intikhaab (Fiance aur Nazm donon ke Mamle main) bohat Khoob , wish you best of luck....Nazm waqayee acchhi hai.

Noor_gr8 · February 5, 2006, 5:24pm

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hmmmmmmmmmmm very gud

DB · February 6, 2006, 5:07am

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I can almost hear music in background and sing this like a song.

fazeelat · February 6, 2006, 7:08am

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thanx to all

Lovely_Me · February 6, 2006, 8:31am

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very nice

fazeelat · February 13, 2006, 7:46am

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thanx L^M

Prince_Ali · March 8, 2006, 1:47pm

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:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 9, 2006, 8:54am

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Nice ... :)

fazeelat · March 21, 2006, 9:29am

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thanx to all of u

hiccup · April 3, 2006, 2:01pm

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"one love is all we need"...

being_lonely · April 4, 2006, 10:07am

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achi hi keep it up dear :)

fazeelat · April 20, 2006, 5:30am

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thanx to all of u.:)

Shahana · April 23, 2006, 11:25am

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Very nice.:k:

Sorry for the late reply. Looking forward to more of your work.:k:

Precious_Khan · May 11, 2006, 10:19am

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Buhat Khoooob

Dil-shikastah · May 25, 2006, 6:28pm

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so sweet! :)

fazeelat · July 1, 2006, 3:01pm

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thanx 2 like it

sunny_nicky · July 1, 2006, 10:25pm

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goooooooooooood