i made this when i was 6 or 7!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

koolkomal February 16, 2006, 3:05am 1

i like my skool and i luv my skool
and i think it is very very kool
the kids r great and follow the rules
and if they dont they must b fools
the honesty i learned is a great big tool
and it makes my life very succesful

yeah,i no its kind of stupid,but i was 7!come on!

bizz February 16, 2006, 9:45am 2

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

i remember those ryhming days. couldn’t find the right words, never

khoob kaha hey, shaeyree dill say hoti hey

nia_khan February 16, 2006, 2:22pm 3

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

bestfriend i think it was very cute and sweet.. i should start posting my sister's poetry... :~)

koolkomal February 16, 2006, 3:47pm 4

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

thx!i write other peotry but i dont save it..................................this was just memorized

B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l February 16, 2006, 5:18pm 5

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

No, its not stupid, its kinda cute :)

koolkomal February 16, 2006, 6:34pm 6

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

thx!

shim_thebest February 16, 2006, 7:25pm 7

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its innocently cute version of school for a child

koolkomal February 16, 2006, 8:47pm 8

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

hmhmnhmjmjghdfgsdghs

koolkomal February 16, 2006, 8:48pm 9

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

sorry......^

Depressed about the state of our country...

Noor_gr8 February 17, 2006, 7:02am 10

Re: i made this when i was 6 or 7!

sweet poem